假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Humorous and positive,Mr. Ford was a awesome teacher when I was in the 5th grade. He always made everyone happier. If you ever felt down,and he was the one to go to. Always looked at the bright side of things,Mr. Ford motivated us student to do our best. They often played games and learned a lot too. He really makes my 5th grade year one of the best years of my school life. Mr. Ford treated us the best years of my school life. Mr. Ford treated us as friends instead as kids. Of all the teachers whom have taught me,I’ve never seen anyone who is as patiently as Mr. Ford. I will never forget him.

1. . .. a awesome teacher ... a→an

2. . .. made everyone happier. happier→happy

3. . .. and he was the one ... . 去掉and

4. Always looked at... looked→looking

5. . .. motivated us student... student→ students

6. They often played ... They→We

7. He really makes ... makes→made

8. . .. instead as kids. instead后加of...

9. …whom have taught... whom →who / that

10. . .. as patiently as ... patiently→patient

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A. a joke B. a person

C. a newspaper D. a kind of food

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A. by fax only B. by mail or fax

C. by e-mail only D. by e-mail or fax

13. Along with your entries,you should also provide your .

A. real name B. pen name

C. ID number D. e-mail address

14. Where is the text most probably taken from?

A. A personal diary. B. A contest notice.

C. A news report. D. A lesson plan.

Whether you want to go to high school,work for CCTV,or seek more advanced education in the United States,a strong writing ability in English is 1. (great) desirable. It would not only help you serve the country better,2. create many more opportunities in today's exciting social,cultural,and economic life.

Almost all American colleges and universities require 3. least one term of a writing program,4. is usually reading and writing and expects a lot from the students. Most colleges also require students 5. (take) one or two more advanced reading and writing courses. Besides English,almost all social science courses include a considerable amount of writing,in 6. form of term papers,research projects,or essay exams.Many 7. (nature) science professors also like to have a writing part in 8. (they) course requirements. It’s reasonable to say that writing often 9. (decide) the grade a student will get from a course; it sometimes makes the 10.(different) between A or B. pass or fail.

Can animals be made 1. (work) for us? Some scientists think that one day animals may be trained to do a number of simple jobs that 2. (be) now done by human beings.

They point 3. that at a circus,for example,we may see elephants,monkeys,dogs and other animals doing quite skillful things. Perhaps you have seen them on the television or in a film. If you watch 4. (close) , you may notice that the trainer always gives the animal a piece of candy or a piece of fruit 5. a reward. The scientists say that many 6. (differ) animals may be trained to do a number of simple jobs if they know they will get a reward for 7. (do) them.

Of course,as we know,dogs can be used to guard a house,and soldiers in both old and modem times have used geese to give 8. (warn) by making a lot of noise when a stranger or an enemy comes near. And 9. may be possible to train animals to work in factories. In Russia,for example,pigeons,10. are birds with good eyesight,are being used to watch out for faults in small steel balls that are being made in one factory.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

I live in a quiet neighborhood,that there lives an old lady who always waves to everyone and greets them with a smile. She is such friendly a lady that she is popular with all the people around her. One Sunday morning last year,I found an old lady removing the weeds in his yard alone. I knew about she lived alone then,so I decided give her a hand.

While we were working there,other two girls joined in. After finishing remove the weeds,the old lady invited us to her house for coffee. We didn’ t want to disturb her,so we thanked her and leave. After all,helping the old are a virtue.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

This morning my classmate John was late for class. It was the fifth time that he have been late for class in a week,what made the teacher angry. After the school,I had a talk with John. I said, “It is good manners to be on time for all of your scheduled event. Being on time show you have respect for other people and that you care so much about their time as your own. In fact,all success people,view their time as a precious resource. Valuing others’ time and earning your respect is an important part of your individual reputation." Heard what I said,John made up his mind to be late again.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

While shopping in a store yesterday,I was slightly annoying by somebody’s screaming children,who just would not quiet down. The little boy could be heard throughout the store. He looked for me as I passed his mother and I smiled as I looked back. He said “hi” in quiet and easy tone. I said “hi” back and gave him an even big smile. The boy didn’t smile back but I didn't hear it yelling the rest of the time when I was in the store. It is truly that if you smile at someone,you would brighten their day. In fact,it not only brightens their day,and makes your own light to shine as well.

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假定你是李华。你在某英文报上看到了一则招聘启事。请阅读启事并根据写作要点写一封应征邮件。

写作要点：1.陈述应征目的；

2. 说明应征条件(能力、性格等) ；

3. 询问情况(是否可以只做三个月，有无年龄限制) 。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数。

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Interviewer: Today,weJ re pleased 61.(welcome) Janet Whittall,our local Comic Relief organiser. Hello,Janet. Thanks for being with us here today.

Janet: It's a pleasure.

Interviewer: Could you tell us 62. little bit of the history behind Comic Relief?

Janet: Yeah. In 1985,the charity 63. (create) to raise funds for the victims of the famine (饥荒) in Sudan. But they also wanted to look at the more widespread needs 64. poor people all over the world.

Interviewer: Why Comic Relief? What's the story behind the name?

Janet: Well,it was first set 65. by com (喜剧演员) and it uses laughter to get its message across. And the appeal of 66. (do) something silly in a good cause is very 67. (power) . More than 80 million pounds were raised on Red Nose Day last year.

Interviewer: 68. will you be doing on Red Nose Day this year?

Janet: We are holding a huge Red Dinner Party in the centre of town. Everyone has to dress in red,bring along some red food and of course pay

a generous bill 69. will all go to Comic Relief... What about you?

Interviewer: The staff here have advised me to shave my head and have a red dragon 70. (paint) on it.

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