假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

This morning my classmate John was late for class. It was the fifth time that he have been late for class in a week,what made the teacher angry. After the school,I had a talk with John. I said, “It is good manners to be on time for all of your scheduled event. Being on time show you have respect for other people and that you care so much about their time as your own. In fact,all success people,view their time as a precious resource. Valuing others’ time and earning your respect is an important part of your individual reputation." Heard what I said,John made up his mind to be late again.

1. . .. that he have been... have→had

2. . .. what made the teacher... what → which

3. After the school... 去掉 the

4. . .. your scheduled event. event →events

5. Being on time show... show→shows

6. . .. care so much about... so→as

7. …all success people ... success→successful

8. . .. earning your respect... your→their

9. Heard what I said... Heard→Hearing

10. …made up his mind to ... to 前加not / never

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Is conversation a lost art?

The next time you eat at a restaurant,take some time to look around you. What do you notice? 1 How many of them are engaged(忙于） in face-to-face conversations? On the other hand,how many of them have their heads down using a smartphone?

Thanks to smartphones and the Internet,we’ re able to text,email,or make phone calls all day long.2 Experts argue,however,that the types of communication made possible by modem technology have come at the expense of real,face-to-face conversations. Even though we re connecting more than ever,the exchanges aren't as deep as in-person conversations.

Do we really spend that much time on electronic devices（设备）， though? 3 According to a recent study,today's young Americans (ages 8-18) spend more than seven-and-a-half hours every day on electronic devices,such as smartphones,televisions,computers,and video games.

So what's the big deal? Many experts have noted that a reliance（依赖） upon electronic communica- tions can have a negative effect on social skills and writing skills. 4 While digital communications teach certain skills and habits,face-to-face conversations teach other skills that are important for our overall well-being.

5 Experts urge people to unplug more often. Set aside time without electronics to share face-to-face conversations with friends and family. Keeping a healthy balance between on-screen and off-screen discussions will make you a better communicator in all areas of your life.

A. Researchers have found the answer is yes.

B. Pay particular attention to the other people around you.

C. How can we be sure we don't lose the art of conversation?

D. When you're sad or lonely,a smile may make a huge difference.

E. This can make it harder to keep healthy relationships as an adult.

F. In many ways,v/e re communicating more than

G. There's an average of 11 hours of media content in those seven-and-a-half hours.

“If I can help even one of you be more successful,” says the 1. (speak) standing in front of a crowd of 400 people, “then I've done my job."

It’s 2. (amaze) how often people say“If I can help just one ...” That seems 3. a very low standard. Just one? Why not 10 ? Or as many as possible?

How many people would feel confident if their child's third grade teacher 4. (say) ，“If I can help just one student be successful,then I’ve done my job?” What about the 5. , . students in the class? It’s acceptable to aim for everyone and miss a few. There is no great value,however,in 6. (aim) for a few and being satisfied when you get them.

Providing value in the world means that the things you say and the things you do have the power 7. (help) more than one person or one company. If 8. you do provides value for the vast minority,you're 9. (absolute) talking to the wrong audience or setting your goals too low. Whatever 10. cause is,something has to change.

Lori: I have a lot of business English students and a lot of times we end up 1. (talk) about what leads to success,and 2. is interesting that many of them mention luck.

Mike: People can make their own luck. What people regard 3. being lucky,you can actually create to a degree.

Lori: Right. Luck is down to how you respond to the 4. (opportunity) that come your way.Was 5. any other point you thought was particularly interesting?

Mike: Yes. Many think that talent is something that you have to have to be 6. (success) .In my opinion,if you want to be good at something,talent helps but at 7. end of the day hard work is what you do.

Lori: I agree. And another interesting thing is passion (热爱) . If people love the things they do,they,re going to work harder 一 and the funny thing is that if you do so,the money kind of comes 8. (automatic) .

Mike: And when you love 9. you’ re doing,hard work doesn’t seem like hard work.

Lori: Yeah,and you also have to be prepared for all kinds of problems 10.get in your way. If you give up when things get tough,you will never succeed.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Humorous and positive,Mr. Ford was a awesome teacher when I was in the 5th grade. He always made everyone happier. If you ever felt down,and he was the one to go to. Always looked at the bright side of things,Mr. Ford motivated us student to do our best. They often played games and learned a lot too. He really makes my 5th grade year one of the best years of my school life. Mr. Ford treated us the best years of my school life. Mr. Ford treated us as friends instead as kids. Of all the teachers whom have taught me,I’ve never seen anyone who is as patiently as Mr. Ford. I will never forget him.

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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

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Five reasons your scale might be wrong

1. You weigh yourself on different days each week.

In a Cornell University study published last year,researchers analyzed the food and weight diaries that 80 people kept for up to a year. They found that people's weight changed considerably throughout the week. 36 Keep weigh-in days consistent for a more accurate assessment.

2. 37

File this one under “Yes,scientists have actually studied this/' When University of North Dakota researchers weighed people with and without clothes at various times of the year,they found that men can reduce 2. 5 pounds for their clothing and women can reduce around two pounds,on average.

3. You don't take muscle gain into consideration. You’ve heard that muscle is denser (密度大的) than fat. 38 If you start a strength-training routine,the number on the scale (秤) might not change,but you could still lose inches and drop a clothing size or two.

4. You just drank a lot of water.

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5. You weigh yourself after hard exercise.

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A. You miscalculate your clothing.

B. But don't worry,it's just a temporary gain.

C. Salty foods cause your body to save extra water.

D. In fact,it takes up only about a third as much space.

E. Jump on the scale if you need to improve confidence.

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F. A. R.M. and Healthy World are part of a growing trend of community cafes. In 2003,Denise Cerreta opened the first in Salt Lake City. Cerreta now runs the One World Everybody Eats Foundation,helping others copy her pay-what-you-can model.

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28. What did the author do at F. A. R.M. Cafe last summer?

A. She worked as a volunteer.

B. She overpaid for her food.

C. She ate free of charge.

D. She enjoyed a meal.

29. What is the advantage of community cafes compared with soup kitchens?

A. People can have free food.

B. People can maintain their dignity.

C. People can stay as long as they like.

D. People can find their places in society.

30. Why are community cafes becoming popular in the neighborhoods?

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B. They help to bring people together.

C. Theycreatealotofjobopportunities.

D. They support local economic development.

31. How did the author feel about working at Healthy World Cafe?

A. It paid well. B. It changed her.

C. It was beneficial. D. It was easy for her.

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