题目内容
7.阅读下面内容,然后按照要求写一篇120词左右的英语短文.网上购物正变得越越流行,但是任何事情都有两面性,网上购物也不例外.请根据以下表格所提供的信息,为学校的刊物写一篇报道,分析其优缺点并给出自己的看法.字120以内,题目和开头已给出,不计入字数.
优点 | 缺点 |
a.方便 | a.很难辨别是否是假货 |
b.商品价格往往较低 | b.在购买前无法试用和检查,缺乏购物乐趣 |
c.可以看到别的客户的评价,有助于做出选择 | c.网络支付不安全 |
你的看法 … |
Online shopping has been gaining popularity in the recent years.But what are the advantages and disadvantages of it?
分析 本文是一个表格式的作文,根据表格提供的内容文章可写成三段式.第一段描述网购的优点,第二段网购的缺点,第三段针对以上内容个人发表看法.要把表格中的要点信心扩展成一个个完整的句子,然后根据文章的中心话题和要求,把这些要点连句成文.本文运用句式多样,定语从句和宾语从句的交替使用为文章增添了亮色.abviously,nevertheless,as for me这些短语的运用让文章更加流畅.
亮点句型一:Last but not least,you can see other customers'comments,which can help you make choices.最后但并非最不重要的,你可以看到其他客户的意见,这可以帮助您作出选择.这是一个非限制性定语从句,定语从句which can help you make choices中关系代词which指代前面整个句子的意思.
亮点句型二:For one thing,it is very hard to tell whether the goods are fake or not.一方面,很难判断货物是否是假的.句中it是形式主语,动词不定式to tell whether the goods are fake or not是真正的宾语;其中句子whether the goods are fake or not是宾语从句,做动词tell的宾语.
解答 Online shopping has been gaining popularity in the recent years.But what are the advantages and disadvantages of it?
Obviously,online shopping has a number of advantages.To begin with,it's a convenient way to purchase goods.People can buy things without going out.Moreover,goods online are usually sold at lower prices than in conventional stores.Last but not least,you can see other customers'comments,which can help you make choices(亮点句型一).【阐述优点】
Nevertheless,as every coin has two sides,shopping online also has disadvantages.For one thing,it is very hard to tell whether the goods are fake or not.(亮点句型二)For another,customers lose some pleasure of shopping because they can't try or check the goods before buying them.Additionally,it's not safe to pay online.Your passwords can be stolen.【阐述缺点】
As for me,the advantages of online shopping outweigh its disadvantages.We should learn to make the best use of it and prevent losses.【个人观点】
点评 本文属于提纲作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
题目 | 怎样保护濒危动物 |
现状 | 如今世界上有很多动物都面临灭绝的危险,我们是该做些事情来保护它们了 |
建议 | 1.我们需要制定一些法律来保护它们; 2.我们应该建立更多的自然保护区,保护它们的栖息地 3.我们必须把动物看作是我们的好朋友来保护它们和它们共享我们的世界 |
注意:报告的Heading已为你写好.
项 目 | 优 点 | 缺 点 |
阅读纸质图书 | 方便阅读、做笔记 | 不易携带 |
不伤害视力 | 浪费纸张、不环保 | |
利于养成阅读的习惯 |
From:Li Hua
Date:23.04.13
Subject:Reading paper books.
注意:1.词数150左右;演讲的开头和结尾已写好,不记人总词数.
2.不要逐字逐条翻译,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文.
浪费现象 | 危害 | 措施 |
1.水、电. 2.餐厅的食物. 3.其他(由考生自己添加) | 1.自身性格. 2.父母财政负担. 3.自然资源 | (内容由考生自己添加) |
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With the improvement of living standard,there are a lot of waste on campus.For example the students
That's all.Thank you!
时间和地点 | 10月底,美国西北部 |
火灾原因 | 一青年工人在林中吸烟 |
持续时间 | 3个多星期 |
参加救火人员 | 数千名消防队员及当地村民 |
伤亡人数 | 9人死亡,约80人受伤 |
经济损失 | 至少2000万美元 |
影响 | 震惊全国 |
参考词汇:经济损失 economic losses; 消防队员 firefighter.