题目内容
19.假如你是某英文报刊的通讯员,请根据以下表格以"A Big Forest Fire"为题,写一篇简单报道,并发表你的看法.时间和地点 | 10月底,美国西北部 |
火灾原因 | 一青年工人在林中吸烟 |
持续时间 | 3个多星期 |
参加救火人员 | 数千名消防队员及当地村民 |
伤亡人数 | 9人死亡,约80人受伤 |
经济损失 | 至少2000万美元 |
影响 | 震惊全国 |
参考词汇:经济损失 economic losses; 消防队员 firefighter.
分析 根据提示判断本文属于材料作文.通过提示语可知写作内容为报道一则消息并表明自己的看法.所以在行文构思时可采取两段式.第一段描述事情的发生及影响,注意不要遗漏表格里的信息.在描述事件的时候,可以按照时间顺序讲述,也可以采用别的方法.同时注意上下文的衔接,灵活使用过渡词以及各种句型,长短句结合,搭配适当的过渡词使文章衔接自然.可第二段用两到三句话发表关于这个事件的个人看法.文中使用的词汇难度得当,固定搭配使用灵活,都为文章增色不少.本文长短句结合,复合句的使用频率很高,非限制性定语从句的运用给文章增添了亮色.
亮点句型一.The fire,which resulted from the smoking of a careless young man,lasted three weeks and caused economic losses of about 20 million dollars.这场火灾是由一个粗心的年轻人吸烟造成的,持续了三个星期,造成了大约2000万美元的经济损失.这是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词是fire,在定语从句which resulted from the smoking of a careless young man中做主语,
亮点句型二.Thousands of firefighters and local villagers fought together and they finally managed to put out the great fire.成千上万的消防员和当地村民一起战斗,他们终于扑灭了大火.本句是一个由并列连词and引导的Thousands of firefighters and local villagers fought together 和 they finally managed to put out the great fire的并列句.其中在第一个句子中Thousands of firefighters and local villagers 是并列主语.
解答 A Big Forest Fire
A terrible fire broke out at the end of October in a forest in the southwest of America.The fire,which resulted from the smoking of a careless young man,lasted three weeks and caused economic losses of about 20 million dollars.(亮点句型一)What's worse,nine persons lost their lives in the fire and about 80 were seriously injured as a result of the fire.Thousands of firefighters and local villagers fought together and they finally managed to put out the great fire.(亮点句型二)The fire astonished the whole nation.【描述火灾情况】
In my personal opinion,fire is very important in our life but sometimes it can be very dangerous,so we'd better be careful with it.【表达个人观点】
点评 本文属于提纲作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
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烦恼 | 解决办法 |
外形不美 | 不必在意,关注内在美 |
朋友少,不被他人理解 | 多参加活动,多与别人交流 |
与父母有代沟,经常吵架 | 加强沟通,互相理解 |
学习成绩不好,压力大 | ? |
1.开头已写好,不记入词数;
2.语言通顺,结构严谨.
参考词汇:内在美 inner beauty 除去 get rid of
Boys and girls:
We high school students do have some growing pains,but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. .
That's all.Thank you.
网上购物正变得越越流行,但是任何事情都有两面性,网上购物也不例外.请根据以下表格所提供的信息,为学校的刊物写一篇报道,分析其优缺点并给出自己的看法.字120以内,题目和开头已给出,不计入字数.
优点 | 缺点 |
a.方便 | a.很难辨别是否是假货 |
b.商品价格往往较低 | b.在购买前无法试用和检查,缺乏购物乐趣 |
c.可以看到别的客户的评价,有助于做出选择 | c.网络支付不安全 |
你的看法 … |
Online shopping has been gaining popularity in the recent years.But what are the advantages and disadvantages of it?
80%支持 | 1、增强体质; 2、培养合作精神; 3、学会如何面对胜负; |
20%反对 | 1、并非是强身健体的唯一形式; 2、容易造成伤害; 3、影响学习; |
你的看法 | (至少两点理由)… |
2.字数150左右.文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数.
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名.
注:增强体质 build up one's strength
Some people like sport while others not in our life.Recently,our school conducted a survey about whether the school should hold a sports meeting or not,students'opinions are divided on the topic.
注意:
1.信中要包括下表中的所有内容;
2.词数:120左右;
3.(答题卷)信的开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数.
4.参考词汇:sense of judgment(判断力)
事由 | 教室内的电脑不能上网,建议学校开通网络. |
原因 | 1.有利于查找资料; 2.浏览新闻,了解信息; 3.作为高中生,我们正在形成自己的判断力. |
I'm writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom.
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A. | giving | B. | to give | C. | being given | D. | to be given |