Question

【题目】李华是生活在某个社区的孩子，她感到孩子们的社区生活单调，几乎没有朋友，于是打算向社区负责人黄叔叔提出解决该问题的建议。请你就此事以李华的名义写一篇 100 词左右的邮件。

内容包括：

1. 组织社区里的孩子参加清洁本小区的劳动。

2. 提供一个固定场所供孩子们课后学习和交流。

3. 鼓励孩子们加入社区足球俱乐部并安排比赛。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头与结尾已为你写好。

Dear Mr. Huang,

I am Li Hua, a child living in this community.______________________________

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Uncle Huang,

I am Li Hua, a child living in this community. Most of the children in our community feel lonely and bored because we have few friends here. To change this situation, I’d like to offer some suggestions.

First, would you please organize the children to clean up our neighborhood regularly? Through this activivty , we can know each other and make new friends. Second, I wonder if you could find us a room to do our homework so that we can help and learn from each other. Third, I think it’s a good idea to encourage children to join the community’s football club and arrange some matches.

I hope we can get more involved in our community and our life will be colorful and full of fun.

Best wished!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】范文运用一些常见的短语make new friends交朋友；learn from从……中学习；encourage sb to do 鼓励某人做某事；get involved in 参与；I am Li Hua, a child living in this community.这个句子运用到现在分词作后置定语；To change this situation, I’d like to offer some suggestions这个句子中运用到不定式作目的状语；Second, I wonder if you could find us a room to do our homework so that we can help and learn from each other.这个句子中运用到if引导的宾语从句。