Question

【题目】你和家人外出郊游时，看到化工厂附近一条污染严重的河流:臭气熏天，大量死鱼漂在河面上，景象惨不忍睹。当晚又碰巧看到电视上黄河断流的新闻报道，心情十分沉重，你决心写一封倡议书呼吁全校同学去保护水资源。

用英语写一篇150词左右的短文，要求包括上面所述内容。

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Answer 1

【答案】Boys and girls，

Several days ago，my family went for an outing.　When we passed by a chemical factory，we saw the smelly industrial wastewater running into the river that should be quite clear but is very dirty now.　A few dead fishes were floating on the surface of the water.　The scene made me very sad.

In the evening，I happened to watch the news report on TV，which said that the Yellow River had run out of water this year.　I was burdened with a heavy heart.

My dear classmates，if we go on wasting water，the scene I just described will become a more terrible fact in the near future.　We all know that water is vital to human beings and to all the living things.　I really hope people all over the world can care and protect the water resources.

【解析】根据题目要求，首先考生应该按题目所述，具体地描述看到的现象，其后的倡议内容需要一定程度的自由发挥。

这篇作文可以分为三段来写。第一段应该描述题目第一句的内容。题目所含内容较具体，并且使用像“臭气熏天、惨不忍睹”这样的形容词来突出河流的污染严重。在描述的时候要注意变通，用所学的词汇表达相似的效果。

第二段可以简短描述题目中第二句话内容。注意用所学的内容表达“黄河断流、心情沉重”。第三段的内容应该是呼吁同学们保护水资源。可以通过强调水资源的重要性，保护水资源的紧迫程度等晓之以理，使呼吁有说服力。

【范文亮点】

灵活运用了短语和单词来表达，使文章用词地道不呆板。例如，went for an outing，去郊游；smelly industrial wastewater，难闻的工业废水；floating on the surface of the water，漂在水面上；the water resources，水资源。

句式丰富高级。用了非限制性定语从句：I happened to watch the news report on TV，which said that the Yellow River had run out of water this year.其中用run out of water表示断流；被动句：I was burdened with a heavy heart. 文章句子表达清晰、结构合理，给人留下深刻印象。