题目内容
5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Linda，
How is everything going with you？I've returned to Shanghai，tiredly but happy．I can't thank you enough for all the kindness you offered during my stay in New Zealand．
When I first got to there．I found hard to use English properly．It was you who always helped me with patience．Now I have made such a great progress that I can speak English more fluent．I even have a large vocabulary than before．I am not scared of English any more．
When I am homesick．you kept me company，chatting，playing games or showed me around the scenic spots．You made me felt as if I were one of your family members．There are so much wonderful memories fresh in my mind．
In addition，please remember me to your parents．
Best wishes，
Yours，
Yu Lei．
分析 本文展示的是于雷写给Linda的一封感谢信．信中于雷告诉Linda他已经返回了上海，并感谢Linda在他在新西兰期间为他所作的一切．他刚到那里的时候，发现自己很难恰当的使用英语，是Linda耐心的帮助了他，使他能更流利地说英语，并且词汇量也丰富了很多；当他生病的时候，Linda一直陪着他，和他聊天，玩游戏，带他参观周围的风景名胜区，使他感到自己就像是她们的家庭成员一样；从而在于雷的脑海里留下了许多美好的回忆．
解答 Dear Linda，
How is everything going with you？I've returned to Shanghai，tiredly but happy．I can't thank you enough
tired
for all the kindness you offered during my stay in New Zealand．When I first got to there．
去掉to
I found∧hard to use English properly．It was you who always helped me with patience．
it
Now I have made such a great progress that I can speak English more fluent．
去掉a fluently
I even have a large vocabulary than before．I am not scared of English any more．
larger
When I am homesick．you kept me company，chatting，playing games or showed me around the scenic
was showing
spots．You made me felt as if I were one of your family members．There are so much wonderful
feel many
memories fresh in my mind．
In addition，please remember me to your parents．
Best wishes，
Yours，
Yu Lei
1．将tiredly 改为tired 考查形容词的用法 此处用形容词作伴随状语，说明主语的情况；故用tired
2．去掉to 考查副词的用法 由于此处用在副词（there）之前，故去掉介词to
3．在found之后加it 考查代词it作形式宾语的用法 由于本句真正的宾语是动词不定式短语to use English properly；故在此处加形式宾语it
4．去掉a 考查固定结构的用法 在固定结构"such+a/an+形容词+名词的单数形式"中；如果名词为复数形式或不可数名词，应去掉a/an；由于progress为不可数名词，故去掉a
5．将fluent改为fluently 考查副词的用法 此处用来修饰动词短语speak English，故用副词；意为：我能更流利地说英语了
6．将large改为larger 考查形容词比较级的用法 本句的意思是：与以前相比，我甚至拥有了更大的词汇量；故用比较级
7．将am改为was 考查时态 根据主句"you kept me company你陪伴着我"使用了一般过去时可知，when引导的时间状语从句，应表示过去；故用一般过去时
8．将showed改为showing 考查现在分词的用法"chatting，playing games…around the scenic spots"在句中作并列方式状语，动词chat，play games以及show与逻辑主语you构成主谓关系；故用动词的现在分词形式
意为：你陪伴着我，和我聊天，玩游戏，带我参观周围的风景名胜区．
9．将felt改为feel 考查固定短语的用法"make sb．do sth．"意为：让某人做某事；本句的意思是：你让我觉得我好像就是你们的家庭成员一样
10．将much改为many 考查形容词的用法 由于此处用来修饰可数名词 memories （复数形式）；故用many
点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．
There are different recipes （食谱） for making sushi．This one is really easy and fun．Try it!
| Ingredients ?200grams of raw salmon （三文鱼） in one piece （other raw fish like tuna is fine） ?2cups of rice ?2cups of water ?1/2cups of vinegar ?1teaspoon of salt ?2tablespoons of sugar ?Wasabi （芥末酱） ?Japanese soy sauce （酱油） | Instructions ?Wash your hands before you start． ?Put the sugar and salt in the vinegar （醋） to make a mixture．Keep it in a container． ?Boil the rice in the 2cups of water．This is a little less water than usual to make the rice slightly harder． ?Leave the rice to cool down for 10minutes after it's boiled． ?Put the rice into a large container．Add half of the mixture． ?Mix it all together with your hands．Keep mixing until it sticks together．You may need to add more of the mixture． ?Let the rice cool down． ?Wet your hands．Make balls of rice．Each one should be about the size of a table tennis ball． ?Take a sharp knife and cut the salmon into thin slices．Each slice should be about 3mm thick． ?With the rice ball in one hand，press the cut salmon on top．Make it into a rectangular （矩形的） shape． ?Put the sushi on a plate． ?Put a little wasabi and soy sauce in a small dish． ?Serve the sushi to your friends．It goes well with green tea． |
| Attention ?The biggest concern people have about sushi is its freshness．Raw fish can attract bacteria，which can makes us ill or even cause death．When choosing a whole fish，the eyes should be clear．The skin should be bright and smooth and not breaking-up．When choosing cut fish，the meat ought not to give off an unpleasant smell．It should also"bounce back"at you when you touch it．In other words，it should look fairly hard．Don't buy sushi in the street．Buy from shops or supermarkets that others can recommend． ?Lots of wasabi also helps kill bacteria．It also makes your head want to explode． |
A．pour some green tea into rice
B．eat it with a bit soy sauce and wasabi
C．add as much wasabi as possible to get a healthy snack
D．choose cooked fish rather than fish that are uncooked
70．What does this passage mainly discuss？C
A．Making sushi is easy and fun
B．popular Japanese fast food
C．Making your own sushi
D．There are different recipes for making sushi
71．We can infer from the passage thatA．
A．Sushi has become a multi-billion industry
B．Making sushi is a demanding job for every one
C．Sushi is popular not only in Japan but also in China
D．You should buy sushi in shops or supermarkets only on people's recommendation．