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1．假设你是李华，在网上看到中国青年动物保护联盟（ChinaYouthAnimalProtectionAssociation/CYAPA）向全国中学生招募1000名暑期志愿者进行保护濒危动物的知识普及活动．你想申请成为其中一员．请用英语写一封自我推荐邮件．要点如下：1．说明写信目的；2．简述个人情况和申请优势；3．表达期望．
注意：1．字数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，让行文连贯；3．开头，结尾已给出（不计入你所写字数）．DearSir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a senior 3 student．I learnt that China Youth Animal Association wants to recruit 1，000 volunteers to protect endangered animals．I can't wait to write to you，hoping to seize the opportunity to do something for animal protection．（高分句型一）
Firstly，being a student，I am good at biology．I have a good knowledge of endangered animals．What's more，nothing can delight me so much as caring for animals that bring us endless comfort and pleasure．（高分句型二）Last but not least，I am eager to appeal to more people to protect them．Only if we human beings take effective measures can they be preserved．（高分句型三）
On the whole，I'm qualified to be your volunteer．I would appreciate it if my application could get your approval．I'm looking forward to your reply!
Bestwishes！
Yourssincerely，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李华，在网上看到中国青年动物保护联盟（ChinaYouthAnimalProtectionAssociation/CYAPA）向全国中学生招募1000名暑期志愿者进行保护濒危动物的知识普及活动．你想申请成为其中一员．请用英语写一封自我推荐邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：说明写信目的；简述个人情况和申请优势；表达期望 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：can't wait to do迫不及待；Firstly首先；What's more而且；Last but not least最后同样最重要；take effective measures采取有效措施；On the whole总的来说；look forward to 盼望；
I can't wait to write to you，hoping to seize the opportunity to do something for animal protection．（高分句型一）
What's more，nothing can delight me so much as caring for animals that bring us endless comfort and pleasure．（高分句型二）
Only if we human beings take effective measures can they be preserved．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I'm Li Hua，a senior 3 student．I learnt that China Youth Animal Association wants to recruit 1，000 volunteers to protect endangered animals．I can't wait to write to you，hoping to seize the opportunity to do something for animal protection．（高分句型一）
       Firstly，being a student，I am good at biology．I have a good knowledge of endangered animals．What's more，nothing can delight me so much as caring for animals that bring us endless comfort and pleasure．（高分句型二）Last but not least，I am eager to appeal to more people to protect them．Only if we human beings take effective measures can they be preserved．（高分句型三）
      On the whole，I'm qualified to be your volunteer．I would appreciate it if my application could get your approval．I'm looking forward to your reply!
      Best wishes！
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．