Question

10．假设你是华夏中学的学生李华．你和在郑州上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去上海旅游，但你因故不能赴约．请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1．表示歉意；
2．解释原因；
3．另约时间．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节．
Dear Tom，
I am really sorry to tell you that I can't go to Shanghai with you next weekend，which I have promised．（高分句型一）I apologize for it and want you to know what happened．（高分句型二）
Just now，my cousin，Xiaoming，who left home to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family．（高分句型三）You know，we haven't seen each other for nearly a year．
I sincerely hope you can accept my apology．Shanghai is a place worth visiting，so I'd like to make another date with you to go there together．Once again，I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 假设你是华夏中学的学生李华．你和在郑州上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去上海旅游，但你因故不能赴约．请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：表示歉意；解释原因；另约时间 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：further study （进一步学习/深造），informed sb that（通知某人…），pick sb up （用车接某人），accept my appreciate（接受谢意），make another date （另外约定），show sb around （带领某人参观），inconvenience（不方便）
I am really sorry to tell you that I can't go to Shanghai with you next weekend，which I have promised．（高分句型一）
I apologize for it and want you to know what happened．（高分句型二）
Just now，my cousin，Xiaoming，who left home to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
      I am really sorry to tell you that I can't go to Shanghai with you next weekend，which I have promised．（高分句型一）I apologize for it and want you to know what happened．（高分句型二）
      Just now，my cousin，Xiaoming，who left home to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family．（高分句型三）You know，we haven't seen each other for nearly a year．
      I sincerely hope you can accept my apology．Shanghai is a place worth visiting，so I'd like to make another date with you to go there together．Once again，I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused．
                                                                
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．