Question

5．假定你是高三学生王明．你的网友Susan给你写信，想要了解你近期的学习和生活计划．现根据如下内容给他写一封信：
1．学好英语并提高学习成绩；
2．每天抽时间进行体育锻炼；
3．周日去看望爷爷奶奶．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Susan，
I'm glad to hear from you．You want to know my plans in recent periods．In fact，my life is very simple，but rich．The detailed plans are as follows：
First，I plan to learn English well and improve my grades．To improve my English，I will read books in English and speak more．Second，as an old saying goes，life is exercise and the first wealth is health．Thus，I am going to spend at least half an hour everyday in taking exercise to keep my health．At last，I intend to visit my grandparents every Sunday and help them do housework．
Yours sincerely，
Wang Ming．

Answer 1

分析 as an old saying goes，（高分句型一）life is exercise and the first wealth is health．
该句使用了中国一句谚语，即生命在于运动，人生最大的财富在于健康；
Thus，（高分句型二）I am going to spend at least half an hour everyday in taking exercise to keep my health．
该句使用了be going to do 将来时表示自己打算要做的事情；句子里spend+时间 in doing 花时间做某事；
衔接词使用较流畅：First，Second，At last；
整篇文章时态运用较好，在谈及自己未来计划时，使用了一般将来时；以第一人称口吻叙述计划；

解答 Dear Susan，
      I'm glad to hear from you．You want to know my  plans in recent periods．In fact，my life is very simple，but rich．The detailed plans are as follows：（总说我的生活情况）
      First，（计划一）I plan to learn English well and improve my grades．To improve my English，I will read books in English and speak more．（计划二） Second，as an old saying goes，（高分句型一）life is exercise and the first wealth is health．Thus，（高分句型二）I am going to spend at least half an hour everyday in taking exercise to keep my health．（计划三）At last，I intend to visit my grandparents every Sunday and help them do housework．
                                                                                                                                     Yours sincerely
                                                                                                                                      Wang Ming

点评 本次写作为提纲类作文，考生在写作时，要讲要点概括齐全，并注意时态的选用为一般现在时和一般将来时．尤其是在表达自己打算要去做的事情时，可以使用be going to do句型．