题目内容
13.假定你是李华,计划寒假找份兼职工作.下面的招聘广告引起了你的注意,请根据要点(箭头所指内容)写一封申请信.注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节使行文连贯;
3.开头已经给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Mr.Smith,
I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's winter camp.I'm quite interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job.
I'm outgoing,energetic,well-organized and responsible.And most importantly,I love working with children!In the past two years,as the monitor in my class,I have proved myself to be an excellent helper to my teachers.I speak fluent English,which enables me to help native English teachers communicate freely and effectively with students in an English-only environment.Iwillsoonhaveathree-weekwintervacation,soIhavenoproblemworkingoneveningsandweekends.Icanstartworkingfromtheendofthismonth.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemethisopportunity.(表示期望)
Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 高分句型
句型一:
I'm quite interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job.使用and连接的并列句,表示"我对这个职位很感兴趣,而且我认为我的性格和经验让我能够胜任这份工作".
句型二:
I speak fluent English,which enables me to help native English teachers communicate freely and effectively with students in an English-only environment.使用which引导的非限制性定语从句,表示"我讲一口流利的英语,这使我可以帮助外籍教师能够自由的,有效的与学生在以英语为唯一环境的条件下交流".
解答 Dear Mr.Smith,
I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's winter camp.I'm quite interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job.【高分句型一】I'm outgoing,energetic,well-organized and responsible.And most importantly,I love working with children!In the past two years,as the monitor in my class,I have proved myself to be an excellent helper to my teachers.(个人优势)I speak fluent English,which enables me to help native English teachers communicate freely and effectively with students in an English-only environment.【高分句型二】
I will soon have a three-week winter vacation,so I have no problem working on evenings and weekends.I can start working from the end of this month.I would appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity.(表示期望)
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系.根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩.