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11．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
Ms．Trump is my history teacher．She loves a subject that she teaches and has a completely knowledge of it，too．History comes alive in his class，where no one talks about something but the topic．She likes to teach by telling stories，what always makes her lessons so interesting but easy to understand．Ms．Trump also has a good knowledge of other subject and often links it to what she teaches about．The best part about her is that she's always nice to those students who needs more time to grasp the subject，encouraging them ask questions so that they can understand the subject better．

分析 本文主要介绍作者的历史老师Ms．Trump．她对历史知识掌握得很好，让她的课有趣而容易学，总是鼓励学生问问题以便他们能更好地理解这门课程．

解答 Ms．Trump is my history teacher．She loves a subject that she teaches and has a completely knowledge of it，too．History comes alive in his class，where no one talks about something but the topic．She likes to teach by telling stories，what always makes her lessons so interesting but easy to understand．Ms．Trump also has a good knowledge of other subject and often links it to what she teaches about．The best part about her is that she's always nice to those students who needs more time to grasp the subject，encouraging them∧ask questions so that they can understand the subject better．
详解：
1．a改为the 考查冠词．subject后接有that引导的定语从句表示特指，要用定冠词the．
2．completely改为complete 考查形容词．knowledge是名词，要用形容词修饰．
3．his改为her 考查代词．全文讲述的是Ms．Trump的事情，用代词her．
4．something改为anything 考查代词．根据句中的no one可知，此句表示否定的意义，要用anything，something用于肯定句中．
5．what改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词stories在从句中作主语，有关系代词which，what不引导定语从句．
6．but改为and 考查连词．interesting和easy是并列关系，而非转折关系，用连词and．
7．subject改为subjects 考查名词．"其它的科目"不止一科，要用复数形式．
8．去掉about 考查词语用法．  teach是及物动词，已有what作其宾语，不用介词，about是多余的，要去掉．
9．needs改为need 考查主谓一致．在定语从句中，谓语动词的数与先行词students一致，要用复数谓语动词need．
10．加to 考查动词不定式．encourage sb．to do sth．意为"鼓励某人做某事"，后接动词不定式作宾语补足语．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was snowing heavily Monday morning. Li Hua was at the bus stop, waited for Bus No. 601 to go to school. After the while, the bus came and she got on it. There are many passengers in the bus. Some were talking but some were looking out of the windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. The driver turned around and said, “Sorry. The bus has been broken down. Please get off and help push the bus.” When we heard this, Li Hua and the other passenger got off the bus. They worked hardly together, pushing the bus slowly backward. Soon the bus was running again. All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.
5．假定你是高三学生王明．你的网友Susan给你写信，想要了解你近期的学习和生活计划．现根据如下内容给他写一封信：
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注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Susan，
I'm glad to hear from you．You want to know my plans in recent periods．In fact，my life is very simple，but rich．The detailed plans are as follows：
First，I plan to learn English well and improve my grades．To improve my English，I will read books in English and speak more．Second，as an old saying goes，life is exercise and the first wealth is health．Thus，I am going to spend at least half an hour everyday in taking exercise to keep my health．At last，I intend to visit my grandparents every Sunday and help them do housework．
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