Question

11．假如你是李华，开学之初，你在英语听力学习上遇到了困难，发邮件向已回美国的外教Jenny请教，内容如下：
1．表达对她的思念．
2．英语听力学习遇到的困难．
3．寻求提升英语听力能力的建议并邀请她方便时再来中国．
注意：
1．词数100左右．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．邮件开头已写好（不计入总词数）
Dear Jenny，
How are you doing these days？
It's almost two months since I saw you off at the airport．（高分句型一）I miss you a lot．
Thank you so much for your help with my English study．Now I'm faced with some new learning problems．Firstly，I feel it difficult to do well in listening．Besides，I often feel nervous when listening to the tape as the speakers speak so fast that I can't follow them．（高分句型二）I really hope you can give me some good advice on how to improve my listening skills．I believe I can make great progress with your help．
By the way，please come back to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you．（高分句型三）I'm looking forward to seeing you again．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，开学之初，你在英语听力学习上遇到了困难，发邮件向已回美国的外教Jenny请教，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：表达对她的思念；英语听力学习遇到的困难；寻求提升英语听力能力的建议并邀请她方便时再来中国．
2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：see sb off给某人送行；be faced with面对；Firstly首先；do well in在…方面做得好；Besides另外；make great progress取得巨大进步；By the way顺便说一下；look forward to盼望；
It's almost two months since I saw you off at the airport．（高分句型一）
Besides，I often feel nervous when listening to the tape as the speakers speak so fast that I can't follow them．（高分句型二）
By the way，please come back to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jenny，
      How are you doing these days？It's almost two months since I saw you off at the airport．（高分句型一）I miss you a lot．
      Thank you so much for your help with my English study．Now I'm faced with some new learning problems．Firstly，I feel it difficult to do well in listening．Besides，I often feel nervous when listening to the tape as the speakers speak so fast that I can't follow them．（高分句型二）I really hope you can give me some good advice on how to improve my listening skills．I believe I can make great progress with your help．
      By the way，please come back to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you．（高分句型三）I'm looking forward to seeing you again．
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．