题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,得知外教Chris想利用假期外出游玩,你愿意为他做导游。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐线路;
2. 推荐理由(历史、文化等角度);
3. 你的祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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【答案】Dear Chris,
Hearing that you’ll travel around during your holiday, I’m more than happy to serve as your guide. If you travel in Shandong, I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Jinan, which is famous for its springs. It is not only a city with a long history but also has many places of interest. Besides, people in Jinan are friendly and kind. Mountain Tai is another attractive destination. Time permitting, you can experience different cultures and enjoy various local snacks.
Wish you a pleasant journey. (86 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,向外教Chris 推荐旅游线路。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
要求:
1. 推荐线路
2. 描述推荐理由
1)历史角度
2)文化角度
3.美好祝愿
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
travel around; more than happy; serve; strongly recommend; pay a visit; be famous for; not only…but also…; places of interest; friendly and kind; attractive destination; experience; enjoy
第三步:连词成句
1. Hearing that you’ll travel around during your holiday, I’m more than happy to serve as your guide.
2. If you travel in Shandong, I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Jinan, which is famous for its springs.
3. It is not only a city with a long history but also has many places of interest.
4. Besides, people in Jinan are friendly and kind.
5. Mountain Tai is another attractive destination.
6. Time permitting, you can experience different cultures and enjoy various local snacks.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also)…, Including
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, But, Although + clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,on the other hand…, Some…,while others…, As for, So…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改