题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校将举办“美在校园”(The Beauty at Campus)摄影大赛。请给你的朋友新西兰留学生Lucy写封邮件,邀请她参赛。内容包括:
1. 比赛的目的;
2. 作品要求和截止日期;
3. 投稿地址:photocontest@ school.com。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Lucy,
How is everything going? A photography contest will be organized in our school. Knowing that you are interested in photography, I’m writing to invite you to attend the event. The aim of the event named The Beauty at Campus is to enrich students’ extracurricular activities and strengthen their appreciation of beauty. The photos are required to show the beauty of our campus, and your works should be handed in before July 1st. If you want to join, you can send your photos to photocontest@school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的朋友新西兰留学生Lucy参加你校举办的“美在校园”(The Beauty at Campus)摄影大赛。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 比赛的目的;
2. 作品要求和截止日期;
3. 投稿地址:photocontest@ school.com。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be interested in;invite sb. to do sth.;extracurricular activities;be required to do sth.;hand in;hear from
第三步:连词成句
1. Knowing that you are interested in photography, I’m writing to invite you to attend the event.
2. The aim of the event named The Beauty at Campus is to enrich students’ extracurricular activities and strengthen their appreciation of beauty.
3. The photos are required to show the beauty of our campus, and your works should be handed in before July 1st.
4. Hope to hear from you soon.
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改