Question

2．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter想选修中文作为外语，为此写信征询你的意见．请按以下要求给Peter写封100词左右的回信． 1、鼓励他选修中文； 2、中文的魅力（两点）； 3、学好中文的意义（两点）．注意：信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
Nice to receive your letter，in which you sought for my advice on whether you should choose Chinese as a second language．
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
                                                 Yours，
                                                    Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息美国朋友Peter想选修中文作为外语，为此写信征询你的意见．请按以下要求给Peter写封100词左右的回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：鼓励他选修中文；中文的魅力（两点）；学好中文的意义（两点）．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：seek for寻求；a wise choice明智的选择；for one thing一方面；for another另一方面；What's more而且；do well in在…方面做得好；hesitate to do 犹豫的去做；
For one thing，Chinese is certainly one of the oldest and most beautiful languages that are still being used in the world．（高分句型一）
For another，the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique，thus helping you create a new thinking way．（高分句型二）
Learning Chinese well，you can communicate with the largest population in the world，which helps you with more opportunities to make a career．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       Nice to receive your letter，in which you sought for my advice on whether you should choose Chinese as a second language．I consider it as a wise choice．
       For one thing，Chinese is certainly one of the oldest and most beautiful languages that are still being used in the world．（高分句型一）For another，the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique，thus helping you create a new thinking way．（高分句型二）Learning Chinese well，you can communicate with the largest population in the world，which helps you with more opportunities to make a career．（高分句型三）What's more，the Chinese language is sure to give you a glimpse of the colourful culture of China．
       May you do well in learning Chinese．If you have any problems，don't hesitate to write to me．
       Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．