Question

15．假如你是李华，你远在美国工作的叔叔想要回国发展，来信向你询问家乡的情况．请你给他写一封回信，要点如下：
1．家乡的变化（街道、绿化、建筑）；
2．存在的问题（环境、交通）；
3．希望他为家乡做贡献．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：做贡献make contributions to
Dear uncle，
I'm glad to hear that you will come back to our homeland for development．I think it's a great idea to build our hometown．
Great changes have taken place in our hometown over the last few years．The streets and roads which used to be narrow are wider and cleaner now and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks．More and more tall buildings are being built．However，during the course of creating a more modern city，some problems appear，such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours．Our city government has realized these problems and has taken measures to solve them．I think everyone should do something to make our country more beautiful．
I hope you will make great contributions to our hometown after you come back．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是写给在美国工作的叔叔的一封信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和现在时态（包括一般现在时态，现在完成时态）．内容包括：一肯定对方回国发展的想法；二家乡的变化以及存在的问题；三希望他为家乡做贡献．
高分句型：
1．The streets and roads which used to be narrow are wider and cleaner now and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks．句子里which 引导定语从句，代指先行词The streets and roads；used to 表示"曾经"；are wider and cleaner now 是主句的系动词和表语； growing along the sidewalks是名词trees and flowers 的定语．
曾经狭窄的街道现在又干净又宽阔，沿着人行道有绿树和鲜花．
2．Our city government has realized these problems and has taken measures to solve them．句子里 realized these problems 表示"意识到这些问题"； has taken measures to 表示"采取措施做某事"．
我们的市政府已经意识到这些问题，并且已经采取措施来解决这些问题．

解答 Dear uncle，
   I'm glad to hear that you will come back to our homeland for development．I think it's a great idea to build our hometown．（肯定对方回国发展的想法）
   Great changes have taken place in our hometown over the last few years．The streets and roads which used to be narrow are wider and cleaner now and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks．【高分句型一】More and more tall buildings are being built．However，during the course of creating a more modern city，some problems appear，such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours．Our city government has realized these problems and has taken measures to solve them．【高分句型二】I think everyone should do something to make our country more beautiful（家乡的变化以及存在的问题）．
    I hope you will make great contributions to our hometown after you come back．（希望他为家乡做贡献）
                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
书面表达是一个高度综合性的题目，旨在考查考生的英语基础，发扬个性、关注环境的设题理念仍将是未来几年高考书面表 达的基本思路． 试题设置均为半开放式，给考生一定提 示的同时，也给考生提供了更为宽广的思维 空间，使考生留有很大的自由发挥的余地，这样更能全面和客观地考查考生的语言组织 和书面表达的能力．要写出一篇好的文章，考生不仅要精炼地表达所给信息，更加重要 的是在自由发挥部分，要有自己独到的见解．