题目内容
【题目】假定你是李津,是一名高三学生,自上个月开始你家长不再允许你使用手机上的 app软件,他们认为这对学习没有帮助还浪费时间,但是你不这样认为,为此你感到很苦恼。 请你用英语写一封信向你的美国笔友 John 求助。
内容应包括:
1. 介绍情况
2. 你的想法
3. 希望得到 John 的帮助并了解美国家长对此事的看法注意:
1. 实当增加细节,不少于 100 词
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数
Dear John,
I’m sorry to bother you, but
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Look forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Jin
【答案】Dear John,
I’m sorry to bother you, but I’m really in urgent need of your help.
Ever since last month, my parents haven’t allowed me to use mobile phones, because they think it is a waste of time using apps on the phone, which they believe will affect my study. However, I don’t agree with them. I know I’m a Senior 3 student and I just use the apps related to my study, such as searching information on the Internet or looking up new words in the E-dictionary. Actually, they really help to broaden my horizon and I have made great progress in my study.
To be honest, I have tried to share my ideas with my parents, but they still stick to their opinions. So what should I do? I really need your help, and I also want to know attitudes of American parents.
Look forward to your reply.
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就家长不允许使用手机上app软件的情况写信向朋友求助。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时
结构:总分
要求:
1. 表明写信目的
2. 介绍事情经过和自己的想法
3. 希望得到 John 的帮助并了解美国家长对此事的看法
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
be sorry to do sth/ in need of/ allow sb to do sth/ a waste of time/ have an effect on/ do harm to/ be related to/ broaden one’s horizon/ be aware of/ one’s attitude to/ stick to
第三步:连词成句
I’m sorry to bother you, but I’m really in urgent need of your help.
Ever since last month, my parents haven’t allowed me to use mobile phones, because they think it is a waste of time using apps on the phone, which they believe will affect my study.
I don’t agree with them.
I know I’m a Senior 3 student and I just use the apps related to my study, such as searching information on the Internet or looking up new words in the E-dictionary.
They really help to broaden my horizon and I have made great progress in my study.
I have tried to share my ideas with my parents, but they still stick to their opinions.
I really need your help, and I also want to know attitudes of American parents.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)