Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，你在上周日搭坐102路公交车，该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒。于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。要点如下：

1. 司机的不文明行为(大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等)。

2. 希望尽快查清此事。

注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：调查investigate

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua. I am writing to complain about one of your bus-drivers’ improper and rude behaviors.

Last Sunday, I was taking the No. 102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast. So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving, but he didn’t pay any attention. What’s worse, he drove even faster. Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind. But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance. However, he didn’t apologize but said rudely “It’s none of your business.”

I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语complain about抱怨；keep on doing继续做某事；concentrate on集中精力于；pay any attention.注意；take measures to do 采取措施做某事；Last Sunday, I was taking the No. 102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast.这个句子运用到not only but also 及whose引导的定语从句；Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind这个句子运用到非谓语动词 ；