Question

【题目】假定你是李华，已经在今年的全国中学生英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖。在准备的参赛的过程中，曾得到过美国外教Mr. Smith的帮助。请你给Mr. Smith写信，要点包括：

1.完成比赛，已经获奖。

2.感谢他的帮助。

3.欢迎他再次来中国做客。

注意：

1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头语和结束语已为你写出。

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, your former student in China._____________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, your former student in China. I am writing to express my t hanks to you for helping me improve my spoken English. I have already finished my speech in the National English speech contest for middle school students. Thanks to your help, I have won the first prize in it and got so mu chunforgettable experience.

I’m really frategul to you for your help, without which it would have been much more difficult for me. I still remember the days when you taught me English. My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work.

If there is a chance, welcome to China, I am looking forward to your coming.

Best regards.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】首先，这是一封书信，书信的要求很明确，共有三点，即完成比赛，已经获奖、感谢外教的帮助、以及欢迎外教来中国做客，而且文章可以增加其他细节是文章更加自然流畅。那么就要注意以下几点：

1：文章字数要求100字左右，三个要求，因此，应合理分配字数，段落清楚，详略得当，语意明晰。

2：文章可以增加相关细节，是行文连贯，因此可以注重事件的前因后果，注意所选细节的典型的合适。加上一些合适的连接词，递进词的选用，使全文更加自然。

文章亮点：

1优秀词汇：former（之前的），express（表达），spoken（口语化的），unforgettable（难以忘怀的），creative（富有创造力的）

2常用短语：the International English speech（国际英语演讲竞赛）

Thanks to;because of（由于）

3精辟句型：

I am writing to express my thanks to you for helping improve my spoken English.（因为什么事而谢谢某人）

I am looking forward to your coming.（非常期待做某事）