Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

At present, I am extremely happy because I am doing all what I like. As a senior three student, I study hard every day and live it to the full. It feels well to study hard with my determining classmates to fulfill our dreams. When I was recalled the happy things which happened to me, the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all. It was a time when my family is going through financial difficulties. So I made up my mind to win the scholarship, hoped to lighten my parents financial burden. After making tons of painstaking efforts, I succeeded. On the ceremony, my mom was the most poorly-dressed woman, and with the brightest smile on her face.

Answer 1

【答案】1.In present改为At present或者In the present

2.all what改为all that或者去掉what 或者去掉all.

3.feel well 改为feel good

4.determining改为determined

5.was recalled去掉was

6.toppde it 改为topped them

7.is going 改为was going

8.hopde改为hoping

9.parents改为parents’

10.and with改为but with

【解析】1.In present改为At present或者In the present

2.all what改为all that或者去掉what 或者去掉all.

考查定语从句。先行词是all，故关系代词只能用that，all that=what， what引导名词从句。所以all what改为all that.

3.feel well 改为feel good

考查系表结构。feel 系动词后要用形容词good改为feel.

4.determining改为determined

考查形容词。determining→determined。此处修饰classmates，故用determined表示“有决心的，意志坚定的”。

5.was recalled去掉was

考查语态。当我们加快曾经的快乐。我们回忆，不是我们被回忆而是回忆，was recalled去掉was。

6.toppde it 改为topped them

考查代词。topped it→topped them。考查代词。此处指的是上文提到的"the happy things",应用them。

7.is going 改为was going

考查时态。那是我的家庭曾经历经济困难的时候。曾经要，is going→was going。考查动词的时态。根据前面的"It was a time when"可知,此处说的是过去的情况,故用一般过去时。

8.hopde改为hoping

hoped→hoping。我下定决心要赢得奖学金，以此希望减轻父母的经济负担。考查非谓语动词。此处需要用现在分词作伴随状语。

9.parents改为parents’。

考查形容词性。希望减轻父母的经济负担，父母的经济负担，parents 改为parents’

10.and with改为but with

考查连词。我妈妈是穿着最寒酸的女人，但她的脸上带着最灿烂的笑容。上下文之间有逻辑上的转折关系,故用转折连词yet/but。