题目内容
【题目】假设你叫李华,是校学生会主席。学生会决定于2017年9月16日~22日举办第三届艺术周,请你根据以下内容写一份书面通知。
★参赛方式:以班级为单位
★活动内容:书法,绘画,歌舞,乐器表演等
★评奖方式:由专家和学生组成评奖小组,根据班级总分,评出前六名;作为奖励,前两名将有机会代表学校参加省中学生艺术节
★报名时间:本周五之前
★如有疑问,请联系学生会
注意:1. 词数120左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使内容连贯;
3. 参考词汇:第三届艺术周the Third Arts Week;省中学生艺术节the Provincial Arts Festival;书法 calligraphy; 乐器musical instruments;专家expert;短剧short plays。
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【答案】NOTICE
To make our school life colorful, we have decided to hold the Third Arts Week in the lecture hall. It will last seven days, from September 16th to 22nd, 2017.
Our Arts Week will cover a wide range of activities, including calligraphy, drawing, short plays, playing musical instruments, as well as singing and dancing. The judges will be made up of experts and students. Prizes will be given according to the total scores of the classes. We’ll choose the first six classes as the winners. As a reward, the first two top winners will have the chance to attend the Provincial Arts Festival.
Each class is expected to take an active part and sign up for it before Friday. And it is hoped that all of the students will make good preparations and take the chance to show your talent. For more information, please contact the Students’ Union. We’ll be more than glad to offer help to you.
The Students’ Union
【解析】本文是一篇为第三节艺术周写的通知。属于提纲式作文。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
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