Question

7．假设你是李华，正在带领来自英国某中学的交换生参观你校的图书馆．请你根据以下要点，用英语为他们做一个简短的介绍：
1．图书馆的环境：前有花园，后有教学楼，内有各种书籍、报刊杂志等；
2．借阅规定：一次至多借5本，保留10天；
3．开放时间：周二到周日8：30------21：30，周一闭馆．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4．文中不得出现你学校的名称．
Boys and girls，may I have your attention，please？
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Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮点句型一：As you can see，in front of the library is a beautiful garden and the teaching building is right behind it．正如你所看到的，图书馆前面是一个美丽的花园，教学楼就在它后面．这是一个非限制性定语从句．as是关系代词，这代后面整个句子的意思．
亮点句型二：When you get into the library，you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects．当你进入图书馆的时候，你会看到许多书架上摆满了各种各样的书．本句中When you get into the library是一个由when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 Boys and girls，may I have your attention，please？
Boys and girls，may I have your attention，please？The building we are visiting is the library．As you can see，in front of the library is a beautiful garden and the teaching building is right behind it（亮点句型一）．When you get into the library，you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects．（亮点句型二）There are also newspapers and magazines near the reading zone．According to the rules，every student can borrow up to five books at a time and keep them for 10 days．The library is open from 8：30am to 9：30pm from Tuesday to Sunday and is closed on Monday．We all like the library very much．Now you can visit it by yourselves．Remember：be quiet，please!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．