题目内容
12．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文．短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I want to tell you an impressive story happening during my first lesson．On hearing the bell，the students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can．But a boy，Li Ming，which father had died a month earlier，was late for the class．He quiet stood outside the classroom．I smiled to him and let him come in．After a while，he cried on his desk．Then I walked to her and asked what had happened．He told me that his mother was ill and that he has to buy some medicine for her．At the same time，he apologized me for his lateness．Moving by his words，I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named"Mother"for the students．How time flied!Class was over when I realized it．From the story I felt we should show a respect for our parent and do our best to help them．
分析 短文叙述了在我第一节课遇到的事情，我的一个同学李明因为父亲去世，情绪低落，在我的帮助之下渐渐走出来．
解答 I want to tell you an impressive story happening during my first lesson．On hearing the bell，the students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can．But a boy，Li Ming，which father had died a month earlier，was late for the class．He quiet stood outside the classroom．I smiled to him and let him come in．After a while，he cried on his desk．Then I walked to her and asked what had happened．He told me that his mother was ill and that he has to buy some medicine for her．At the same time，he apologized∧me for his lateness．Moving by his words，I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named"Mother"for the students．How time flied!Class was over when I realized it．From the story I felt we should show a respect for our parent and do our best to help them．
1．can改为could 考查时态．根据前文的介绍可知，此处叙述过去的事情，故用could．
2．which改为whose 考查定语从句连接词．句意为他的父亲一个月之前去世，故定语从句使用whose father．
3．quiet改为quietly 考查副词．此处quietly修饰动词stand．
4．her 改为him 考查代词．前面提到的是Li Ming，是个男孩，所以用him．
5．has 改为had 考查时态．根据前文可知，叙事过去的事情，故使用had．
6．在me前加to 考查介词．此处是固定短语，apologize to sb for sth，意思是因为…向某人道歉．
7．moving改为moved 考查形容词．修饰句子主语I，用moved，表示感到感动．
8．when改为before 考查连接词．此处before引导时间状语从句，意思是还没来得及．
9．去掉a 考查冠词．show respect for sb 是固定短语，表示对…尊敬．
10．parent改为parents 考查名词复数．我们的父母应该是两个人，所以用复数形式parents．
点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．
