Question

10．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    This summer，I was lucky to have joined an archaeology summer camp，which lasted ten
days．During the summer camp，we visited several museums which many valuable cultural relics were displayed．Even more excited，we got a chance to go to an archaeological site．It was the first time that we had been very close to ancient civilization that I could witness how the digging was carried out．The speeches were made by famous archaeologists informed us on much knowledge about this field．Besides，I make many friends who are interested in archaeology and we are still in constantly touch now，talking about how we like．

Answer 1

分析 今年夏天，我很幸运地加入了考古夏令营，为期十天．活动中，我们参观了很多博物馆．更让我们兴奋的是我们得到了去考古遗址的机会．这是我们第一次如此近距离的目睹古代文明的发掘过程．一位有名的考古学家还告诉了我们很多考古领域的知识．此外，我还交了很多对考古感兴趣的朋友，我们一直联系，谈论我们喜欢的东西．

解答 This summer，I was lucky to have joined∧an archaeology summer camp，which lasted ten
                                                           加in
days．During the summer camp，we visited several museums which many valuable cultural relics were displayed．
                                                                                         where
Even more excited，we got a chance to go to an archaeological site．
                exciting            the
It was the first time that we had been very close to ancient civilization that I could witness how the digging was carried out．
                                                       so
The speeches were made by famous archaeologists informed us on much knowledge about this field．
                    去掉                                                                 of
Besides，I make many friends who are interested in archaeology and we are still in constantly touch now，talking about how we like．
                 made                                                                                                constant                                          what
1．加in．join是表示加入某个组织，句意表达的是加入夏令营活动，要用join in．
2．which改为where．句中many valuable cultural relics were displayed是修饰museums的一个定语从句，从句结构完整，要用关系副词来引导．
3．excited改为exciting．句意表达是一件事，要用现在分词修饰．过去分词表达的是人的感受．
4．a改为the．句意表达的是特指．
5．very改为so． 句型搭配，so…that…如此…以致…
6．were去掉．句中made by famous archaeologists是修饰speeches的后置定语，不是句子．
7．on改为of．短语搭配，inform sb of sth告诉某人某事．
8．make改为made．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
9．constantly改为constant．句中是修饰名词touch接触，要用形容词．
10．how改为what．句中we like是作介词about的宾语从句，从句中like缺少宾语，要用连接代词．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．