Question

2．你校校长打算改进食堂的设施（facilities）和服务（service），请你给校长写信，谈谈你的建议．字数在120左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文为书信．
写信目的为：建议改进食堂的设施（facilities）和服务（service）
写作要点为：1，描述话题内容；2，分析原因；3，提供建议及呼吁．

解答 March8th，2010
Dear Mr．President，
My classmates and I are very glad to know that you are determined to improve our canteen facilities and service，I would like to give my opinions．
Firstly，the quality of the dishes should be improved，Undoubtedly，there are a lot of delicious dishes，but all the year round，they are the same．More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day．
Apart from the quality，the price is supposed to be adjusted，too．Some food which is delicious has been priced dramatically high that most of us can't afford．
What's more，the environment is so noisy that we can't enjoy our meals in good mood．I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax．From bad to worse，the lights are so dull．
I will appreciate from the bottom of our hearts if you will take actions immediately．
Yours，
David

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