题目内容
11.假如你是李华,最近与好友Mike吵架了,事后你非常后悔,想修复与好友的关系.现在写邮件给你在美国的笔友Peter写信请求帮助.邮件的内容包括:1.吵架的原因.
2.吵架后的感受.
3.请求Peter提出建议.
注意:1.词数 100 词左右.
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?The reason why I am writing to you is that I quarreled with my best friend Mike and I need your help urgently.
The quarrel occurredwhen we were discussing whether we should go out for a big dinner for the celebration of our football team winning the game last weekend.Due to the coming examination,I insisted on studying at the school while she opposed strongly.After the incident,we have not chatted with each other any more,causing me great depression.Ireally regret what I did and I have been feeling frustrated ever since.Ireally don't want to lose this friend.Could you please offer me some effective and practical advice?Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes
Yours sincerely
LiHua.
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
The quarrel occurred when we were discussing whether we should go out for a big dinner for the celebration of our football team winning the game last weekend
争吵发生时,我们正在讨论我们是否应该去为我们的足球队上周末比赛中获胜的庆祝晚餐.
高分句型二:
Due to the coming examination,I insisted on studying at the school while she opposed strongly.
由于即将到来的考试,我坚持要就读的学校,而她强烈反对.
解答 Dear Peter,
How is everything going?The reason why I am writing to you is that I quarreled with my best friend Mike and I need your help urgently.
The quarrel occurred when we were discussing whether we should go out for a big dinner for the celebration of our football team winning the game last weekend(高分句型一).Due to the coming examination,I insisted on studying at the school while she opposed strongly(高分句型二).After the incident,we have not chatted with each other any more,causing me great depression.I really regret what I did and I have been feeling frustrated ever since.I really don't want to lose this friend.Could you please offer me some effective and practical advice?Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes
Yours sincerely
LiHua
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.