Question

【题目】假如你是李华，请代表全班同学给英语老师写一封100个词左右的信。内容要点如下：

1. 课堂上您的微笑，给了我们信心。

2. 若您的课再生动有趣些，我们会更喜欢您。

3. 我们都很优秀，希望得到您更多的表扬。

4. 请多给我们一些建议，少一些命令。

5. 因为您工作一向很努力，所以要学会休息，注意保重自己的身体。

注意：

1. 以第一人称写：

2. 参考词汇：代表 on behalf of； 信心 confidence；合理的 reasonable

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear teacher,

As your student, I’d like to give you some suggestions on behalf of all my classmates.

First, I want to say I love you. And I want to tell you that the smile on your face in English class gives us confidence. Then, we think we will love you more if you make your lessons more lively and more interesting. Also, we think that we are all excellent and hope to be more often praised by you. What’s more, we’d like you to give us some reasonable suggestions always working very hard, it is quite important for you to learn to have a rest and take care of yourself!

Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是要代表全班给老师写一封信，写信要注意格式和称呼。本文给出了5个要点，学生写作时要注意面面俱到。写作时要注意时态、拼写，不要犯低级错误，使用高级词汇来增加文章的可读性，注意使用平时学到的短语和句子结构，注意段落安排，要做到条理清晰。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：on behalf of代表，reasonable合理的，have a rest休息， take care of照顾等，it is quite important for you to learn to have a rest and take care of yourself!运用了形式主语。文章使用了First，Then，Also，What’s more等表示顺序的连接词，使整篇文章的条理更加清晰，层次分明。