题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的好友李明参加了今年的三中好声音(The Voice of Nanning No.3 High School)歌唱比赛,没有进入决赛,感到很伤心。请你给他写一封慰问信,要点如下:
1. 表示难过和理解。
2. 帮助他分析失败原因。
3. 勉励他。
注意:1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:决赛:the finals
Dear Li Ming,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
I am deeply sad to hear that you could not enter the finals of The Voice of Nanning No.3 High School this year. I quite understand how you feel now.
I knew that you had tried very hard for the competition. Maybe you were too nervous, which affected your performance. However, as we know, failure is the mother of success. I do hope you won’t lose heart and will get ready to try again. Still you have many more chances to try for you are so young.
Fate only can be changed by working hard, so if you go on practising singing, I am sure you will succeed next year.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇信件,信件内容要点已给出,好友李明参加了今年的三中好声音(The Voice of Nanning No.3 High School)歌唱比赛,没有进入决赛,感到很伤心。你要给他写一封慰问信, 信件内容应包括表示难过和理解, 帮助他分析失败原因以及勉励他。同学们在写信过程中应注意以下几点。
1信件的格式正确性,信件开头和结尾格式较为固定,但根据题干要求,写信对象的不同,可稍作调整。例如本题中,收信人为李明,写信人为李华。
2这封信主要是对李明没有进入决赛而安慰他,所以时态要以一般现在时为主。
3要点齐全,结构要清晰,但不要对要点进行简单的罗列,应适当添加一些细节及连接词,使上下文流畅,衔接自然。
【范文亮点】
1文章中使用了一些高级词汇和短语如:be deeply sad,affect,as we know,lose heart。
2文章中使用了一些高级句型,如定语从句 Maybe you were too nervous, which affected your performance 谚语failure is the mother of success以及I do hope的句型。
3衔接自然,使用了however,still,,so等过渡的连接词。