Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’m Li Hua, a senior three student in our school. Last Monday I received three America students. We had a wonderful time. And I tasted the pleased feeling of friendship.

In the afternoon, after divided into two groups, we began to work for the coming English speech context. Just as I was wondering what to do next, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom. It was my English teacher. I wondered that he would say. He said that it was a competition that everyone would like to take part in it. He added that was pretty fluent with English, but I needed to arrange my time good.

In the evening, at about half past ten, we finished working. I don’t know the result, but I’m sure without our help, winning the championship will be the effort.

Answer 1

【答案】短文改错（一题1分，共10分）：

1. America→American

2. pleased→pleasing/pleasant

3. after之后加being

4. passed→passing

5. take part in后面的it去掉

6. that→what

7. with→in

8. good→well

9. our→their/ his

10. the→an

【解析】1. 考查形容词。形容词American（美国的）作定语修饰名词students。故America→American.

2. 考查形容词。形容词pleased（高兴的）；形容词pleasing/pleasant（令人高兴的）修饰名词feeling（情感）。故pleased→pleasing/pleasant.

3. 考查动名词。介词after后接名词或动名词，所以要用动名词的被动语态形式（being done）作宾语，故 after之后加being.

4. 考查动名词。固定结构：see sb. doing sth.（看到某人正在做某事），故passed→passing.

5. 考查代词。定语从句中关系代词that已经作了介词in的宾语，故take part in后面的it去掉.

6. 考查代词。宾语从句中用what作动词say的宾语，而that不作任何成份。故that→what.

7. 考查介词。固定短语：in English（用英语），故with→in.

8. 考查副词。副词well作状语，修饰谓语动词，故 good→well.

9. 考查代词。根据句意：但我相信没有他/他们的帮助，赢得冠军还将需要一份努力的。故our→their/ his.

10. 考查冠词。句意：但我相信没有他/他们的帮助，赢得冠军还将需要一份努力的。此处用an表示“一份”修饰可数名词effort（努力），故 the→an.