题目内容
书面表达(15分)
假设你是李华,周末要去大连玩,大连的姨妈邀请你去她家住,请根据以下信息给她写一封回信。
接受邀请;
想念姨妈做的饭菜;
送给姨妈的礼物:李华妈妈织的毛衣;
请姨妈周五晚上7点半接站。
注意:1、 词数不少于50; 2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3、开头和结尾已经给出
Dear aunt,
Love,
Li Hua
Dear aunt,
Thank you for inviting me to your house and I’d like to stay in your house for a few days. I still remember the delicious dishes you cooked the last time I visited you. I miss them so much that I can’t wait to have a meal with you again. I’ll be arriving at Dalian Station at 7:30 p.m. on Friday. It may be very dark then, so would you please pick me up?
By the way, my mother has made a beautiful sweater for you as a gift.
Thank you again. See you Friday.
Love,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语arrive at 到达;pick up 接某人;by the way 顺便;I still remember the delicious dishes you cooked the last time I visited you.这个句子运用到you cooked做the delicious dishes定语从句;I miss them so much that I can’t wait to have a meal with you again.这个句子运用到so…that这个句型;
考点: 提纲类作文