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2.下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面加上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
There is a belief that good habits result from resisting temptation.Enough examples can be found to illustrate the point of view.To begin with,eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat is a wonderful healthy habit.Of course,you would have to refuse a variety of delicious snack and junk food.Also,excellent habit of reading classic literature in a regular basis is another case in point.But you would definitely have to spend more time on your favorite TV programs or fascinating computer games.
Developing good habits,without any doubt,involve great perseverance and determination to stand against various temptations around us.It is not easy to do so.However,as we all know it,good habits are benefit to our lives and learning.Therefore,as far as I'm concerned,it's worth to develop great habits at the cost of resisting temptation.

分析 本文围绕人们的一种信念"良好的习惯源自抵制诱惑"展开论述,提出多吃水果和蔬菜少吃肉以及抵制甜食和垃圾食品是健康的饮食方式、养成一个好的阅读传统文化的习惯,并少解除电视及电脑游戏,最后陈述了自己的观点:培养好习惯需要坚强的意志和抵制周围各种诱惑的决心.

解答 There is a belief that good habits result from resisting temptation.Enough examples can be found to illustrate the point of view.To begin with,eat m
                                                     eating
ore fruit and vegetables and less meat is a wonderful healthy habit.Of course,you would have to refuse a 
                                   but
variety of delicious snack and junk food.
                              snacks
Also,∧excellent habit of reading classic literature in a regular basis is another case in point.But you 
         an/the                                                        on                             
would definitely have to spend more time on
                                              less 
your favorite TV programs or fascinating computer games.
Developing good habits,without any doubt,involve great perseverance and determination to stand against
                                                                   invilves 
various temptations around us.It is not easy to do so.However,as we all know it,good habits are benefit 
                                                                                                                                               beneficial
to our lives and learning.Therefore,as far as I'm concerned,it's worth to
                                                                                               worthwhile 
develop great habits at the cost of resisting temptation.
1.eat---eating.       考查动名词.本题属于动名词短语做主语;故答案为eating.
2.and---but.         考查连词.句意:多吃水果和蔬菜少吃肉是健康的饮食方式;more和less构成了前后的对立关系,表示转折;故答案为but.
3.snack-snacks.     考查名词.句意:当然你应当拒绝吃零食和垃圾食品.Snack是可数名词;故答案为snacks.
4.excellent前加an/the.考查冠词.根据后面的表语内容another case in point可知,是列举的另外一个因素,表示An excellent habit一种优秀的习惯;即一个好的阅读传统文化的习惯又是另外一回事了.
5.in--on.             考查介词.on a regular basis 经常,例行的,固定短语.
6.more---less.        考查副词.由前面的But可知,此处表示转折关系,所以应该是少看电视或者玩游戏;句意:但你要花费少量的时间在电视上或其它的游戏上;故答案为less.
7.involve--involves.   考查动词的时态.Developing good habits动名词做主语,谓语动词用第三人称单数.
8.know后面it去掉.     考查固定结构.As we know 是非限制定语从句,as代指后面的内容,做know的宾语.
9.benefit--beneficial.     考查形容词.be beneficial to 对..有益;故答案为beneficial.
10.worth-worthwhile.   考查形容词.It is worthwhile to do 值得做某事;故答案为worthwhile.

点评 对于短文改错题要通读短文,把握全篇主旨,弄清上下文的逻辑关系.有时孤立地分析某个句子,其结构正确、语义通顺,无错可改,但如果联系上下文,便会发现有的句子中有不合逻辑的地方,须作出改正.

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