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7．假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Our government is built a"harmonious society"．It is our duty to work hard to
achieve this goals．First of all，we should love our motherland，caring about the
development of our hometowns and take an active part our school's activities．
Secondly，we should respect the old and love the young，included our parents and
teachers．We should also unite the student around us and help each other．Above all，
we must be honestly and reliable in our daily life．Last but not least，we should
try our best to saving energy and protect against our natural environment．Let's start
right now and spares no effort to do a little bit every day!

分析 本段文字讲的是作者对于我们国家建设和谐社会的一些观点．作者认为作为学生首先要热爱祖国，关心家乡的发展，积极参加各项学校活动；其次要尊老爱幼，团结和帮助同学；尤其是要诚实守信，还要节约能源保护环境；为建设和谐社会而努力！

解答 1．build改为building；考查时态，这里用现在进行时，说明我们国家正在努力建设一个和谐社会．
2．goals改为goal；考查名词单复数，this后面跟名词单数．
3，caring改为care；考查句子的并列成分，这里care和前面的love，后面的take是并列成分，作句子的谓语．
4．part后面加in；考查介词，take part in是固定搭配，意为"参加"．
5．included改为including；考查动词分词的用法，这里过去分词included作形容词，放在名词或代词的后面；现在分词including用作介词，放在名词或代词的前面．
6．student改为students；考查名词复数，根据句意"我们周围的学生"不能是一个，所以用复数．
7．honestly改为honest；考查形容词，be+形容词构成系表结构．
8．saving改为save；考查不定式的用法，不定式后面跟动词原形．
9．去掉against；考查动词，protect是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语．protect…against意为"保护…免受"．
10．spares改为spare；考查祈使句和let'sdo结构．这里应该是Let's start right now and let's spare no effort…

点评 1．整体了解短文，抓住中心大意．2．注意实词，虚词的用法以及时态和人称的变化．3 重视语境，结合上下文运用语言基础知识找出错误所在，加以改正．

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下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．       
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
 
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共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
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     2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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2．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
There is a belief that good habits result from resisting temptation．Enough examples can be found to illustrate the point of view．To begin with，eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat is a wonderful healthy habit．Of course，you would have to refuse a variety of delicious snack and junk food．Also，excellent habit of reading classic literature in a regular basis is another case in point．But you would definitely have to spend more time on your favorite TV programs or fascinating computer games．
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11．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
   1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

The saying that practice makes perfect mean that after you have plenty of practice in what you were doing，you will be perfect in it．If you want improve your study and work，remembering that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice．For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use for your talent，practice is necessary．If you only learn grammar rules by the heart and don't do enough exercise，it's certain that you can't understand the language perfectly．But if you real practise a lot，maybe you will understand them much better．In this way，you can apply that you have learned better．

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