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11.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出改正后的词.
注意:1.每处修改及其修改均仅限一词;
      2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Last Friday I went to pay a visit for my former teacher,Mrs.Wang.We used to living
next to each other for many years.About half a year ago,an order came which the old building,along with many other similar ones,were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street.
Mrs.Wang now lives in his new apartment in the suburb,which is much more bigger
than before.The only problem now is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area.However,Mrs.Wang doesn't seem to be concerning about the long diatance.She says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and she is sure life will be better in the future.

分析 本段文字讲述了作者上周五去拜访了以前的老师王小姐,他们以前住在隔壁好多年.大约半年前,政府下令要将这些旧建筑拆除以便修一条大路.王小姐现在住在她郊区的一所公寓里,公寓要比她以前的房子大得多,唯一的问题就是离市区有很远的一段路.然而王小姐并不担心这个,她说几年以后这里会修建一条地铁,生活会好起来的.

解答 1.for改为to;考查介词,pay avisit to是固定搭配,意为"拜访…".                
2.living改为live;考查不定式,used to do是固定搭配,表示过去常常做某事.
3.which改为that;考查关系词的用法,这里是that 引导同位语从句后置,不能用which.当谓语较短,同位语从句较长时,从句常后置.
4.were 改为was;考查主谓一致,这里was 的主语是the old building,所以应该用单数形式.
5.his改为her;考查物主代词的用法,主语是Mrs Wang,所以物主代词用her.
6.去掉more;考查形容词的比较级,much 可以修饰比较级,more不能修饰比较级.
7.took 改为takes;考查时态,这里是一般现在时态,主语是it,所以用takes.                         
8.concerning改为concerned;考查分词的用法,be concerned about表示"担心".
9.that和new之间加a;考查冠词,line 是可数名词,加不定冠词a表示一条地铁线路.      
10.year改为years;考查名词复数,a few后面跟可数名词的复数形式.

点评 短文改错题首先要整体理解短文意思,抓住中心思想,结合语境和上下文关系,充分运用平时掌握的固定搭配,习惯用法,句型结构等等来发现文章的错误之处,加以修正.

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[写作要求]
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