Question

【题目】假设你是李华，最近你所在的班级讨论了北京动物园是否应该迁出市区。请你给Teens写一封信，反映讨论结果。

赞成迁出	1.游客多，易造成交通堵塞 2. 郊区环境有利于动物生存
反对迁出	1.建于1906年，中外闻名 2. 搬迁易造成动物死亡
你的观点	---

注意：1.词数100左右。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：郊区 suburb

Dear Editor,

Recently, in our class there has been a heated discussion about ______________________________________

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

Recently, in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. Some of my classmates are in favor of the move. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well-known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封书信，是关于北京动物园是否应该迁出市区的讨论结果。这篇文章要点表达要完整而准确，清楚展示主题。可以先提出文章的主题，进而列出赞成的观点及其相关的理由，同时在其后可以给出反面的观点，论据要十分充足。文章结构严谨，前后要连贯。

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