题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My dad is an enthusiastic runner. Influencing by him, I was very sporty before the age of 15. Therefore, after I went to high school, I stopped to taking physical exercise because of my busy schoolwork. One morning, I ran for only one minute to catch a bus, but I was quite out breath. This made me realizing that I was overweight. Then I made a decision which I would take up a sport to help myself get in shape again. A friend of me recommended(推荐) a swimming pool not far away from my house. Now I go swimming several times one week and have started to feel the benefit of regularly exercise. Swimming makes me relaxed and energy.
【答案】1.Influencing--Influenced
2. Therefore--However
3. to删去
4. out of breath
5.realizing--realize
6. which--that
7. me--mine
8. one--a
9. regularly--regular
10. energy--energetic
【解析】1.句意:受他的影响,我十五岁就爱运动。主语I和influence之间是被动关系,此处是过去分词做原因状语,故把Influencing—Influenced。
2.句意:我上中学后因为忙于学业把体育锻炼停下来。前后是转折关系,故把Therefore—However。
3.固定结构:stop doing停止做某事,故把to去掉。
4.固定词组:out of breath上气不接下气,故在out 和breath之间加of。
5.句意:这使我意识到我体重增加。make sb. do sth.使某人做某事,故把realizing—realize。
6.此处decision后面是同位语从句而不是定语从句,故把which—that。
7.固定用法:a friend of mine我的一个朋友,此处是双重所有,故把me—mine。
8.固定结构:一周几次。故把one---a。
9.句意:与规律的锻炼。形容词修饰名词,故把regularly—regular。
10.句意:游泳使我放松和精力充沛。此处是形容做宾语补足语,故把energy—energetic。
【题目】假设你是李华,最近你所在的班级讨论了北京动物园是否应该迁出市区。请你给Teens写一封信,反映讨论结果。
赞成迁出 | 1.游客多,易造成交通堵塞 2. 郊区环境有利于动物生存 |
反对迁出 | 1.建于1906年,中外闻名 2. 搬迁易造成动物死亡 |
你的观点 | --- |
注意:1.词数100左右。信的开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:郊区 suburb
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