题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Wang Ping,
I’m very glad to have received a letter you sent me two weeks before. I’ve been thinking about the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finish your studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is bad needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know that a few big company in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For other reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as we are getting old. Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return back. So what are you waiting for?
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】
【1】把第一句的a改成the
【2】before改成ago
【3】ask改成asked
【4】finish改成finishing
【5】that改成what
【6】bad改成badly
【7】company改成companies
【8】other改成another
【9】we改成they
【10】把back去掉
【解析】
【1】把第一句的a改成the这里特指你寄给我的信，故把第一句的a改成the
【2】before改成ago这里指两周前你给给我的信，two years ago两周前，故把before改成ago
【3】ask改成asked句意是：我一直考虑你问我的问题，“问我的问题”应该指过去的事情，故把ask改成asked
【4】finish改成finishing 句意after finishing完成之后，故把finish改成finishing
【5】that改成what句意是：你所学的是中国目前最需要的。此处考查主语从句，主语从句既缺少引导词又缺少主语，故把that改成what
【6】bad改成badly 副词修饰动词，故把bad改成badly
【7】company改成companies几个大公司，“公司”用复数形式，故把company改成companies
【8】other改成another 和前面的For one reason对称，For another reason，故把other改成another
【9】we改成they句意是：随着他们正在渐渐变老，照顾好你的父母。故把we改成they
【10】把back去掉 句中return本身含有back的含义，故把back去掉
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下面是一些需要购买巧克力的人，请为她们选择项是和他们的巧克力：
【1】Mr. And Mrs. Johnson are going to buy a gift for their nephew Mike, who likes chocolate very much. They hope their gift can offer Mike more than delicious food, like bringing more fun and helping him develop a good hobby.
【2】Aron is going to marry Maggie in this month, but this Valentine’s Day he can’t be with his fiancee because he is on a business trip. Therefore, he decides to buy some chocolates in special shape to express his love and missing.
【3】After a 10 years’ leave, Isabella and her high school classmates will have a great party to celebrate the anniversary of graduation. Isabella hopes to share her favorite chocolate, which is with wafer and nuts, with her classmates.
【4】Emma and her husband have a habit to enjoy chocolate with their children every night when watching TV. In order to buy fresh and various chocolates at a lower price, she will choose those unpacked ones.
【5】Cooper Smith is an enthusiastic fan of out-door sports. Each time he goes hiking or rafting, he will prepare everything carefully, including buying some handy chocolates for his body energy supply.