题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom听说在中国通过扫描二维码(scan QR code)就可以轻松实现移动支付(mobile payment),感到不可思议。请你写封邮件告知移动支付在中国的相关情况。内容包括:
1.在中国最流行,提供了便利。
2.快捷且强大的功能:如买早餐,买地铁票。
3.改变我们的生活,引领世界。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
How are you? Glad to tell you something about mobile payment in China.
Mobile payment is verypopular in China. It has made people’s daily life more and more convenient. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes.
By mobile payment, we can pay easily wherever we go. You can buy breakfast on the street and pay by scanning with your smart phone. In the subway station, you scan with your smart phone to purchase your ticket. This is a glimpse into the life of most Chinese - allowing us to bid farewell to the wallet and bank cards.
Mobile payment has greatly changed people's lives in China. It seems that China is really leading in some ways and is also sweeping other nations.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用类作文,是一封信。
第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom听说在中国通过扫描二维码(scan QR code)就可以轻松实现移动支付(mobile payment),感到不可思议。请你写封邮件告知移动支付在中国的相关情况。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:mobile payment移动支付,popular受欢迎,convenient方便的,scan扫描,smart phone智能手机,subway station地铁车站,purchase购买,glimpse一瞥,bid farewell to告别,bank cards银行卡。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
亮点说明:作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如:By mobile payment, we can pay easily wherever we go.让步状语从句的运用。本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。