短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分.满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除

或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

(试题内容如下)

My parents have decided to take me to pay visit to Britain. I am excited，hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly，I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly，there are many attractions that interested me a lot，among which is Big Ben. Besides，football，that is popular in England，is my favorite sport. I have been dreaming of watching a live football match there but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet with her. However I do，I am sure I will have a good time.

1.pay后面加

2.hope改为hoping

3.speaker改为speakers

4.can后面加

5.interested改为interest

6.that改为which

7.but改为 and

8.probable 改为probably

9.去掉with

10.however改为whatever

【解析】

1.“访问游览”是固定短语pay a visit to，因此 pay后面加。

2.前后句主语相同，没有连词，用非谓语动词doing形式表示人主动做“我希望”，，hope改为hoping。

3.和当地人们交谈，当地人是复数形式，speaker改为speakers。

4.用to do形式表示目的，为了提高英语， can后面加。

5.因为主语是attractions是复数，所以谓语也用复数，通篇是现在时态，因此interested改为interest。

6.定语从句中逗号后，指代事物不能用that。that改为which。

7.因为前后是并列关系，but改为 and。

8.】副词才能修饰动词，probable 改为probably。

9.】与某人见面，meet是及物动词，直接加宾语。去掉with。

10.因为从句的谓语动词是do,是及物动词，要用代词做它的宾语，而however是副词不能做宾语，however改为whatever。

考点：短文改错。

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If you see a group of kids hitting and abusing an animal, would you stop them? Would you at least call the police? Again people would walk away. Some people do not believe that animal abuse is a big issue.

Every day animals are abused in their homes or on the streets. It seems as if politicians do nothing to stop this issue. Everyone is worried about education and global warming. What about animals? We should not ignore them just because they cannot talk to us. Animals, like us humans, have rights. Every living being has the right to warm shelter and good food, but most importantly, they have the right to be wanted and loved. They have the right to be a special, much loved member of their own family.

There are many organizations that deal with abused animals or animals that have no home like ASPCA, PETA, the Humane Society and many more. There are organizations that deal with this issue, but that does not mean that we still shouldn’t help. The biggest saying that bothers me is, “I am only one person. I can’t make a difference.” If everyone thought like that, we wouldn’t have the organizations and loving people who help the world every day. By helping one animal, you are making a difference.

There are many things you can do right now to help animals around your neighborhood. You can volunteer at your local animal shelter, raise money for animal shelters, inform your community about animal abuse or you can write to your representatives and tell them that animal abuse needs to be taken seriously.

As you walk down the street, try to help any animals you see walking around. You can easily buy a cheap box of dry cat or dog food to feed the animals. If we do not help our animals now, we may never have animals again. Always remember that with every step you take, you help save an animal’s life and isn’t that worth fighting for?

1.Some people won’t stop kids from abusing animals because ______.

A. they are too busy to worry about the animals

B. they don’t take animal abuse seriously

C. they just leave it to the police

D. they are afraid of being laughed at

2.We can learn from the text that ASPCA ______.

A. is another name for the Humane Society

B. provides shelter for both animals and humans

C. deals with such issues as education and global warming

D. aims at protecting animals from being abused

3.Which of the following statements will the author agree with?

A. Dogs have the right to be treated kindly.

B. One person cannot possibly make a difference.

C. Cruelty to animals deserves more attention than global warming.

D. It is the politicians’ duty to stop animal abuse.

4.The main purpose of the text is to ______.

A. criticize those who abuse animals

B. advise people to stop animal abuse

C. show how animals are abused

D. explain why people abuse animals

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假如你叫李华，刚刚升入高中。开学已经两个月了，你认识了很多新同学和老师，还结交了许多新朋友，其中同桌怡欣是你最好的朋友。请你写信给老朋友琳琳，介绍一下你的情况, 并希望大家都能努力, 为三年后的高考而奋斗。

注意: (1) 词数：60--80左右

(2) 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

(3) 参考词汇: the National College Entrance Examinations高考

Dear Linlin

____________________________________________________________________

Yours,

About six years ago I was eating lunch in a restaurant in New York City when a woman and a young boy sat down at the next table, I couldn't help overhearing parts of their conversation. At one point the woman asked, “So, how have you been?” And the boy—who could not have been more than seven or eight years old—replied. “Frankly, I've been feeling a little depressed lately.”

This incident stuck in my mind because it confirmed my growing belief that children are changing. As far as I can remember, my friends and I didn't find out we were “depressed”, that is, in low spirits, until we were in high school.

Undoubtedly a change in children has increased steadily in recent years. Children don't seem childlike anymore. Children speak more like adults, dress more like adults and behave more like adults than they used to.

Whether this is good or bad is difficult to say, but it certainly is different. Childhood as it once was no longer exists. Why?

Human development depends not only on born biological states, but also on patterns of gaining social knowledge. Movement from one social role to another usually involves learning the secrets of the new social positions. Children have always been taught adult secrets, but slowly and in stages; traditionally, we tell sixth graders things we keep hidden from fifth graders.

In the last 30 years, however, a secret-revelation（揭示） machine has been equipped in 98 percent of American homes. It is called television. Television passes information to all viewers alike, whether they are children or adults. Unable to resist the temptation （诱惑）, many children turn their attention from printed texts to the less challenging, more attractive moving pictures.

Communication through print, as a matter of fact, allows for a great deal of control over the social information which children will gain. Children must read simple books before they can read complex materials.

1.According to the author, feeling depressed is ____________.

A. a sure sign of a mental problem in a child

B. a mental state present in all humans, including children

C. something that cannot be avoided in children's mental development

D. something hardly to be expected in a young child

2.According to the author, that today's children seem adult-like results from ____________.

A. the widespread influence of television

B. the poor arrangement of teaching content

C. the fast pace of human scientific development

D. the rising standard of living

3.What does the author think of communication through print for children?

A. It enables children to gain more social information.

B. It develops children's interest in reading and writing.

C. It helps children to read and write well.

D. It can control what children are to learn.

4.What does the author think of the change in today's children?

A. He feels their adult-like behavior is so funny.

B. He thinks the change worthy of note.

C. He considers it a rapid development.

D. He seems to be upset about it.

The Healthy Habits Survey（调查）shows that only about one third of American seniors have correct habits. Here are some findings and expert advice.

1. How many times did you brush your teeth yesterday?

·Finding：A full 33% of seniors brush their teeth only once a day.

·Step：Remove the 300 types of bacteria in your mouth each morning with a battery-operated toothbrush. Brush gently for 2 minutes, at least twice a day.

2.How many times did you wash your hands or bathe yesterday?

·Finding：Seniors, on average, bathe fewer than 3 days a week. And nearly 30%wash their hands only 4 times a day—half of the number doctors recommend.

·Step：We touch our faces around 3,000 times a day—often inviting germs（病菌）to enter our mouth, nose, and eyes. Use toilet paper to avoid touching the door handle. And, most important, wash your hands often with hot running water and soap for 20 seconds.

3. How often do you think about fighting germs?

·Finding：Seniors are not fighting germs as well as they should.

·Step：Be aware of germs. Do you know it is not your toilet but your kitchen sponge（海绵）that can carry more germs than anything else? To kill these germs, keep your sponge in the microwave for 10 seconds.

1.What is found out American seniors?

A. About one third of them brush their teeth only once a day.

B. Nearly 30%of them bathe three days a week .

C. All of them are fighting germs better than expected .

D. Most of them have good habits.

2.Doctors suggest that people should wash their hands .

A. twice a day B. three times a day

C. eight times a day D. four times a day

3.Which of the following is true according to the text ?

A. We should keep from touching our faces .

B. A kitchen sponge can carry more germs than a toilet.

C. There are less than 300 types of bacteria in the mouth .

D. We should wash our hands before touching a door handle .

There are thousands of products of all colors and shapes in a supermarket, making you believe that they are worth a try. How? Packaging is the silent but persuading salesman.

There on the shelves, each bottle, can ,box, and jar has been carefully designed and measured to speak to the inner self of the consumer, because he/she is buying not only a product but also his/her belief in life. Scientists have studied consumer behavior recently and found that the look of the package has a great effect on the “quality” of the product and on how well it sells, because “consumers generally cannot tell between a product and its package. Many products are packages and many packages are products.”, as Louis Cheskin, the first social scientist studying consumers’ feelings for packaging, noticed.

Colors are one of the best tools in packaging. Studies of eye movement have shown that colours draw human attention quickly. Take V8 for example. For many years, the bright red color of tomatoes and carrots on the thin bottle makes you feel that is it very good for your body. And the word “green” today can keep food prices going up.

Shapes are another attraction. Circles often suggest happiness and peacefulness, because these shapes are pleasing to both the eye and the heart. That’s why the round yellow M signs of McDonald’s are inviting to both young and old.

This new consumer response to the colors and shapes of packages reminds producers and sellers that people by to satisfy both body and soul.

1.According to the passage, _____ seems to be able to persuade a consumer to buy the product.

A. the pleasing color of the package

B. he special taste of the product

C. the strange shape of the package

D. the belief in the product

2.If a package or a product is round in shape, it can ____________.

A. bring excitement to the consumers

B. attract the consumers’ attention

C. catch the eye movement of the consumers

D produce a happy and peaceful feeling

3.“And the word green today can keep food prices going up ” This sentence suggests that consumers today are _________.

A. starting to notice the importance of new food

B. enjoying the beauty of nature more than before

C. beginning to like green vegetables

D. paying more attention to their health

4.It can be inferred from the passage that V8 is a kind of ________.

A vegetable dish B. healthy juice

C. iced drink D red vegetable

In 2004, the 410,000 residential(住宅的) fires in America caused more than 14,000 injuries and 3,000 deaths. You can prevent fire-related deaths and injuries, and even most residential fires by knowing about fire safety. 1.

Fire safety escape plan

A fire safety escape plan tells everyone what to do if your home catches fire. Your family need to design an escape plan for your home. 2. When you discuss with your family, it is a good idea to talk about each person’s responsibilities in case of a fire, such as who helps whom out of the house.

Fire safety and kids

3. Children cause thousands of residential fires each year, most of which are caused by children playing with matches. You need to teach your children to obey the following fire safety rules: 4. Always have an adult’s help when cooking. Always STOP, DROP, and ROLL, if you or your clothes catch fire.

Fire safety and your home

Electrical fires are the most common type of residential fires in America. Electric heaters, and clothes dryers are responsible for most of residential electrical fires. If a fire happens, shut off the electricity, put out small fires with your home fire extinguisher(灭火器). Do not put water on electrical fires. 5. Call 911 and report the fire.

A.Don’t stop to save anything.

B.Never play with matches or lighters.

C.Fire safety education begins with children.

D.Do not try to deal with large fires by yourself.

E.Your children are the most important people in your life.

F.The escape plan needs to be known by everyone in your family.

G.Protect you and your family by making an escape plan and learning

For more than six million American children, coming home after school means coming home to an empty house. Some deal with the situation by watching TV. But all of them have something in common. They spend part of their time alone. They're called latchkey children, They're children who look after themselves while their parents work outside. Lynette Long was once the headmaster of an elementary school. She said, “We had a school rule against wearing jewelry. A lot of the kids bed chains around their necks with keys attached. 1 was often telling them to put them inside their shirts. There were so many keys that it never came to my mind what they meant.” Slowly , she learned they were house keys.

She and her husband began talking to the children who had them. They learned of the effect working parents had on their children. Fear is the biggest problem faced by the children at home alone. One in each three latchkey children the Longs talked to are reported to be scared. Many had nightmares and were worried about their own safety.

The most common way latchkey children deal with their fears is by hiding. It might be in a shower stall under a bed, in a closet. The second is TV. They’ll often play it at high volume.

It ‘s hard to get numbers on latchkey children and most patents are slow to admit they leave their children alone.

1.The main idea about "latchkey" children is that they ______.

A. are growing in numbers

B. suffer problems from being left alone

C. watch too much TV during the day

D. are also found in middle schools

2.The main feeling these children have when they are at home alone is_____.

A. tiredness B. freedom

C. loneliness D. fear

3.Which sentence is the topic sentence of Paragraph 1 ?

A. We had a school rule against wearing jewelry.

B. A lot of kids had chains around their necks.

C. I was often telling them to put their keys inside their shirts.

D. She learned the chains around their necks were house keys.

4.The underlined word "nightmares" means _____.

A. night suit B. night habit

C. terrible dreams at nightD. staying up at night

5.We may draw a conclusion that _____.

A. latchkey children enjoy being left alone

B. latchkey children try to hide their feeling

C. latchkey children often watch TV with their parents

D. it's difficult to find out how many latchkey children there

Nothing else ______ more important than water in the place like a desert.

A. we can’t find B. can’t we find

C. can we find D. we can find

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