Question

书面表达（25分）

假如你叫李华，刚刚升入高中。开学已经两个月了，你认识了很多新同学和老师，还结交了许多新朋友，其中同桌怡欣是你最好的朋友。请你写信给老朋友琳琳，介绍一下你的情况, 并希望大家都能努力, 为三年后的高考而奋斗。

注意: (1) 词数：60--80左右

(2) 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

(3) 参考词汇: the National College Entrance Examinations高考

Dear Linlin

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Yours,

 

Answer 1

Dear Linlin,

How time flies!

It has been about two months since I entered high school. Now I’d like to tell you something about my school.

I have made many new friends here. Yi Xin，my deskmate, is my best friend now. We share most interests and we can express our thoughts and feelings after class.

Let’s focus our energy on what we are learning and continue studying hard for the National College Entrance Examinations in less than three years.

Long live our friendship!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语would like to 想做某事；after school 放学；focus our energy on集中精力于；less than少于；Let’s focus our energy on what we are learning and continue studying hard for the National College Entrance Examinations in less than three years.这个句子运用到祈使句和what引导的介词的宾语从句。

考点： 提纲类作文