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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the development of modern technology, there are a plenty of ways for us to contact people. WeChat is probably our favorite, mainly because of its convenient. We can keep in contact with friends whenever it is and wherever we are as long as Wi-Fi is available. Another advantage is it is a relative cheap and quick way of communication. As messages get send and received instantly, the cost of making phone calls is cut down. Besides, music as well as pictures and videos are often downloaded through WeChat, but it is now a useful entertainment tool. However, problems exist at the meanwhile. For example, your identity can be easily revealed, so we should pay attention to protect our personal information.

Answer 1

【答案】①去掉plenty of前a
②convenient改为convenience
③advantage is 后加上that
④relative改为relatively
⑤send改为sent
⑥videos后are改为is
⑦but改为so/and
⑧at the meanwhile改为in the meanwhile
⑨your改为our
⑩protect改为protecting
【解析】①固定搭配：plenty of 足够、大量，故去掉plenty of前a。
②because of后面跟名词、代词宾格和动名词，故把convenient改为convenience。
③此处是that引导的表语从句，故在advantage is 后加上that，that引导表语从句不可省略。
④副词修饰形容词，根据句意可知把relative改为relatively。
⑤句意：信息立刻被发送和收到。根据句意可知，此处用过去分词，get+过去分词，故把send改为sent。
⑥music是句子主语，as well as pictures and videos是同位语，所以后面的谓语动词与music保持一致，故把videos后are改为is。
⑦句意：音乐以及图片和视频往往是通过微信下载，并且它现在也是一个有用的娱乐工具。根据句意可知，此处表示因果或递进关系，故把but改为so/and。
⑧固定词组：in the meanwhile与此同时，故把at the meanwhile改为in the meanwhile。
⑨句意：我们的身份能很容易被透露。与上下文保持一致，故把your 改为our。
⑩固定结构：pay attention to doing sth.故把protect改为protecting。