题目内容
20.假如你是李华.你的美国笔友 即将随其父母来中国,并中国度过中秋节.他来信向你询问 有关中秋节的习俗,请你告诉他有关中秋节的习俗.要点如下:1 历史悠久.2 中国人独有的传统节日.3 家庭团圆.4 共进晚餐.5 吃月饼.6 赏月.
要求:1 词数100 左右.2 可适当添加细节.3 开头已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Mike,
I am glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn Day here.
Now I will introduce something about thefestival.
The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people.It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year,when people of a family get together and enjoy the dinner together.After that they eat moon cakes,which stands for the spirit of the festival-unity.Often,if the weather permits,they will go out of the house to enjoy the bright moonlight,talking about something pleasant.It is one of the most important festivals for Chinese people.
I wish you a pleasant journey and I'm sure you will like our traditional Mid-Autumn Day.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 这是一篇关于中秋节的作文.根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态.内容包括:一点明主题;二介绍中秋节的活动;三希望对方旅途愉快,并且爱上中秋节.高分句型:1.The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people.句子里l with a long history表示 a traditional festival的特点; which引导定语从句 is celebrated only by Chinese people,修饰先行词 a traditional festival.中秋节是一个历史悠久的,中国人独有的传统节日.
2.Often,if the weather permits,they will go out of the house to enjoy the bright moonlight,talking about something pleasant.句子里,条件状语从句的谓语动词 permits表示"允许";talking about something pleasant.是现在分词做伴随状语.如果天气允许,他们常常会在户外欣赏月亮,谈论令人愉快的话题.
解答 Dear Mike,
I am glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn Day here.Now I will introduce something about the festival.(点明主题) The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people.【高分句型一】It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year,when people of a family get together and enjoy the dinner together.After that they eat moon cakes,which stands for the spirit of the festival-unity.Often,if the weather permits,they will go out of the house to enjoy the bright moonlight,talking about something pleasant.【高分句型二】It is one of the most important festivals for Chinese people.(介绍中秋节的活动) I wish you a pleasant journey and I'm sure you will like our traditional Mid-Autumn Day.(希望对方旅途愉快,并且爱上中秋节)
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 考查提纲类作文.审题是否清楚是一篇书面表达成功与否的关键所在,在整个写作过程中起着决定性作用.审好题会让我们做到"磨刀不误砍柴工",审题时要做到以下几点:(1)审要求:书面表达试题一般都由"情景"和"要求"两部分构成."情景"中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等,一般在书面表达题的前半部分;而"要求"一般在书面表达的后半部分,以"注意"形式给出,实际上是对考生提出的要求.因而考生对于题目所提供的说明,应认真分析、反复推敲,搞清提出的内容要求,抓住所要表达的信息点. (2)审文体:高考书面表达的体裁一般有三大类:记叙文、说明文和应用文,具体形式有便条,日记,通知,书信,人物、事情、情景故事的描写,看图说话,缩写,扩写,改写等.审题时要审清文体,注意格式上的不同,避免出错. (3)审人称:考查提纲类作文.审查书面表达题干中隐含的读者对象和撰写人,即搞清楚此篇文章是"由谁写给谁"的.写稿人是谁一般都已明确指出,给出形式假设环境中的"某人",如"假设你是李华",写作时即用第一人称"我",即李华.而读者对象有时没有明示,要考生自己去进行判断. (4)审时态:根据情景判断短文需要的主体时态,即搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事,过去的就用过去时.比如日记,是叙述过去发生的事情,自然用过去时;通知多用将来时.