题目内容
16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I just come back from Britain last week．I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28．We paid a visit to many places，like London，Oxford or the Lake District．I learned much about British culture and history in London，where was my favorite．I also liked Oxford，in which I saw much more old buildings．The Lake District was beautiful，but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there．The most excited thing for me in British was that I made a lot of friends there．
分析 本文讲述了作者去英国学习时的所见所闻，他们参观了很多地方，学习到了英国历史和英国文化方面的知识，但对作者来讲最重要的就是在那里交了很多朋友．
解答 I just come back from Britain last week．I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28．We paid a visit to many places，like London，Oxford or the Lake District．I learned much about British culture and history in London，where was my favorite．I also liked Oxford，in which I saw much more old buildings．The Lake District was beautiful，but it was∧pity that it rained heavily when they were there．The most excited thing for me in British was that I made a lot of friends there．
详解：
1．come改为came；考查动词的时态，本文叙述过去的事情，应用一般过去时．
2．luckily改为lucky；考查形容词，此处用形容词形式作系动词was的表语，构成系表结构．
3．student改为students；考查名词，one of后应用名词复数限定一个范围，意为"…中的一个"．
4．or改为and；考查连词，此处应用and，意为"和"．
5．where改为which；考查定语从句，先行词British culture and history代入非限制性定语从句中作主语，指事物，应用which．
6．much改为many；考查近义词辨析，buildings 为可数名词复数形式，应用many修饰．
7．pity前面加a；考查冠词，It was a pity…是固定用法，意为"真遗憾…"．
8．they改为we；考查人称代词，分析句意为"但遗憾的是我们在那里时下起了大雨"，是作者及其他学生在英国，故用we．
9．excited改为exciting；考查分词作形容词，现在分词作形容词修饰物，过去分词作形容词修饰人，此处修饰thing，故用-ing形式．
10 British-Britain考查词性变化．国名要用名词形式，不能用形容词形式．句意为：对我来说在英国最令人兴奋的就是我在那儿交了许多朋友．
点评 通过快速阅读短文了解短文的基本大意，再分析句子间的结构关系，从词义，词性，固定短语，句式结构等方面去找文中存在的错误加以修改．
