题目内容
【题目】假如你叫李华。最近,你收到美国笔友Tom发来的邮件。在邮件中,Tom说最近自己体质较差总是感冒,经常缺课,因此他非常担心即将到来的考试。请你给他回一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 表示安慰;
2. 提出三点以上建议;
3. 祝他早日康复。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Tom,
I am sorry to hear that you’re in poor health and often get colds, missing lots of classes. However, don’t worry too much about that as well as the coming exam.
Nothing is more important than health in life. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action to recover your health. First of all, consider attaching importance to taking exercise in your spare time, which can help you learn better. In addition, keeping a balanced diet can provide nutrition for your body. What s more, enough sleep can make you full of energy for a whole day and lay a good foundation for everything. When it comes to the coming exam, I would suggest you relax and put yourself in a good mood.
I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick, to the hobbies. I sincerely hope that you’ll soon be fully restored to health and wish you success in the coming exam.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:
本文的写作背景是你的美国笔友Tom说最近自己体质较差总是感冒,经常缺课,因此他非常担心即将到来的考试,给他写封信安慰他,给他提出一些建议并祝他早日康复。成文时应注意以下几点:(1)根据题目写作背景以及提示来写,内容要点齐全。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态:一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点,列出提纲:第一段:安慰Tom;第二段:提出建议(锻炼,平衡膳食,足够的睡眠,放松以及保持好心情);第三段:祝他早日康复。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词短语missing lots of classes做结果状语I am sorry to hear that you’re in poor health and often get colds, missing lots of classes.;比较级表示最高级Nothing is more important than health in life.;it作形式主语In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action to recover your health.;非限制性定语从句……in your spare time, which can help you learn better.;I would suggest you relax and put yourself in a good mood..,固定搭配when it comes to的使用When it comes to the coming exam, I would suggest you relax and put yourself in a good mood.等等。2.使用了过渡词语:However,First of all,In addition,What s more,等。3.使用了重要短语:as well as以及,和;take action采取行动;attach importance to认为…有重要性;provide …for为…提供;stick to坚持。
【题目】Tom是你的同桌,最近他很郁闷,因为他和父母之间有一些分歧。请根据以下提供的内容用英语写一篇短文。
Tom的烦恼 | 1. 数学和语文学得很好,英语和物理比较难,学习压力大。 2. 父母不理解,觉得他每门功课都应该是班上最好的,还经常看他的日记。 3. 他周末想看电视,可是父母除了学习,什么都不让他做。 4. 现在对学习不感兴趣。 |
你的建议 | (至少二条) |
注意:1. 短文应包括所提供内容,也可以适当发挥。
2. 词数:150词左右。开头已给出,不算入总词数。
My deskmate, Tom, feels unhappy recently, for he disagrees with his parents about what he should do or what he shouldn’t do.
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