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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一条横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As is known to we all, America’s national pastime is baseball. It has played in the country since the first settlers arrive. It was a national ball what was liked by many Americans at that time. Although baseball possibly developed from an English game, it is now thought of like an American sport. From the Little League to the Major League, player of all skill levels enjoy testing their power on the “ Field of Dreams”. Famous players, exciting music but the standard stadium food of hot dogs, popcorns and peanuts are popularly among Americans. In a fact, Americans make go to the baseball game a favorite summer outing for many Americans nowadays.

Answer 1

【答案】1.we→us

2.has后加been

3.arrive→arrived

4.what→that/which

5.like→as

6.player→players

7.but→and

8.popularly→popular

9.a 去掉

10.go→going

【解析】第一处：As is known to sb，to为介词，后面应该用宾格，故把we改为us。

第二处：It指baseball，与play之间是被动关系，故在has后加been。

第三处：since+时间状语从句，从句用一般过去时，主句用现在完成时。故arrive改为arrived。

第四处：A national ball后跟的为定语从句，从句缺主语，故把what改为关系代词that/which。

第五处：句意：虽然棒球可能是从英国游戏发展而来的，但它现在被认为是美国的运动。think of...as“把……看做是……”。

第六处：根据此句中的their可知，主语不是一个人，故把player改为players。

第七处：Famous players, exciting music but the standard stadium food of hot dogs, popcorns and peanuts这几样东西为并列关系，故把but改为and。

第八处：popcorns and peanuts are popularly among Americans此句为系表结构，表语要用形容词，而不用副词。

第九处：In fact为固定短语，意为“事实上，实际上”。

第十处：Americans make go to the baseball game a favorite summer outing for many Americans nowadays.此句中go作make的宾语，故改为going。