题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校将举办主题为“我们的地球我们的家”(Our Earth, Our Home)的环保创意活动。请用英语写一封邮件,邀请你的英国朋友Peter参加,内容包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动内容(照片展,旧物利用,环保海报等);
3. 期待Peter参加。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
Our school will hold an environmental protection activity entitled “Our Earth, Our Home” in our school’s stadium this Sunday. I sincerely invite you to take part in it.
This activity aims at improving students’ environmental protection awareness and urging students to take effective action to protect our earth. Various activities will be held. For example, you will enjoy a photo show which displays students’ efforts to gather and classify the rubbish. The process of recycling waste materials will tell us how to deal with the waste materials. The posters of environmental protection will arouse students’ interest in protecting our earth. We also welcome students to put forward more creative methods to make this activity more interesting.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,邀请英国朋友Peter参加学校举办主题为“我们的地球我们的家”(Our Earth, Our Home)的环保创意活动。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
人称:第一、三人称;
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时;
结构:总-分-总法
要点:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动内容(照片展,旧物利用,环保海报等);
3. 期待Peter参加。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
environmental protection activity;school’s stadium;take part in;aim at;take effective action;deal with;waste materials;arouse students’ interest;put forward;look forward to等
第三步:连词成句
1. Our school will hold an environmental protection activity entitled “Our Earth, Our Home” in our school’s stadium this Sunday.
2. I sincerely invite you to take part in it.
3. This activity aims at improving students’ environmental protection awareness and urging students to take effective action to protect our earth.
4. You will enjoy a photo show which displays students’ efforts to gather and classify the rubbish.
5. The process of recycling waste materials will tell us how to deal with the waste materials.
6. The posters of environmental protection will arouse students’ interest in protecting our earth.
7. We also welcome students to put forward more creative methods to make this activity more interesting.
8. I’m looking forward to your coming.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:and;also;
2.表示举例关系:For example等
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改