Question

7．Child raising is probably one of the most difficult jobs for people to do all over the world．Since babies do not come with child raising manuals（指南），couples，especially future mothers，have to learn from their mothers，aunts，mothers-in-law，or any other relative who is close to them．
As children grow up，parents have to find reasonable ways in order to help their children，advise them，punish them，lead them to achievements，and teach them．Sometimes children under ten may behave inappropriately．For example，they learn to say offensive words and they show no respect to their relatives．I think parents in these cases should punish their children in a reasonable way．Children must know those kinds of attitudes are not good at all．
There are many aspects which influence parents in this hard job，for example，the culture in which they live，the economic situation in their society，and the religious environment．
One group consists of people who don't have economical resources or education．In this group，people get married when they are teenagers．Their Children are taken to their grandparents'homes，so the job of child raising is done by grandparents instead of the real parents．If the grandparents are on the sidewalks selling newspapers，cigarettes，or magazines，the children will be like them，too．Some of them even end u being wallet thieves，gang members and drug users．
Other groups of people are hard workers or well-educated．The children grow up in their parents'homes and are disciplined and punished differently．They learn to respect other people，and they are led to achieve in school，sports and communityservice．When they grow up，they often become political leaders，community leaders，and professionals in their fields．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于读写任务类作文，根据英语短文内容，进行概括总结，写作时注意语言要精练，能够准确概括文章大意，并使用好恰当的过渡词，注意句子间的逻辑关系，恰当使用时态和语态，注意主谓一致等．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，要点齐全：There are many factors that influence the parents in bringing up their children．（要点3）句子使用了that引导的限制性定语从句
To make it clear，two different examples are given，which reveal that different family backgrounds and educational methods can surely produce different effects．（要点4）句中To make it clear属于不定式作目的状语，which引导的是非限制性定语从句

解答 Child raising is a tough job for couples，especially for future mothers．（要点1）Parents should try every means to educate their children to behave well．（要点2）There are many factors that influence the parents in bringing up their children．（要点3）To make it clear，two different examples are given，which reveal that different family backgrounds and educational methods can surely produce different effects．（要点4）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．