题目内容
16.假设你是李华,准备参加学校举办的主题为"健康成长"的作文比赛.请按要求写一篇短文,主要内容包括:1.乐观的人生态度
2.参加体育锻炼
3.健康的饮食习惯
注意:词数100左右,可适当增加细节
We all want to grow up happily and healthily.For this goal,we must do several things. .
分析 这是一篇要点文.写作时,首先要写全要点;其次要注意以第一人称来表达;最后,要注意时态以一般现在时态为主.
重点短语和句型:attitude to 对待某事的态度;consist of 组成;in face of 面对;keep fit 保持健康
Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.句中not only…but also…不但…而且…,连接对称结构.
In order to study well,we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.句中so that连接目的状语从句.
If we do those things well,we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.句中if连接条件状语从句.
解答 We all want to grow up happily and healthily.For this goal,we must do several things.【点明主题】
Firstly,we should develop a good attitude to life.Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.(高分句型一)We should be brave in face of difficulties.Secondly,we must study hard because knowledge is power.If we have the power,we can help to build our country and enjoy life better.In order to study well,we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.(高分句型二)We can go running,play ball games or simply take a walk after a day's study.【表达看法】
If we do those things well,we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.(高分句型三)【总结中心】
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
