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【题目】假如你是Miss Wang,收到高一新生李华的来信,信中提到他在学习和生活上的一些困惑,请你根据以下李华遇到的困惑写一封建议信:

困惑

建议

1、高中学习科目繁多学习内容难度较大;

1、制定学习计划:课前、课中、课后

2、学会安排时间;

3、……

2、难以融入新的环境;

1、结交新朋友;

2、参与课外活动

3、

注意: 1. 词数100左右;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 注意卷面整洁、书写规范。问题严重酌情3-6;书法规范卷面漂亮给阅卷老师愉悦感者给以1-3 分的奖励。

4. 开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入所要求词数内。

Dear Li Hua,

I am sorry you are having trouble in adapting to high school life. __________

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Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Miss Wang

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

I am sorry you are having trouble in adapting to high school life. Here are some tips help you solve your problems.

First of all, making a proper studying plan such as previewing the courses before class, keeping yourself focused in class, and reviewing after class, would be helpful to improve your study. Besides, it’s a good idea for you to make some new friends so that you can fit in with the new environment quickly. In addition, you’d better take part in after-class activities, which will help you to organize your spare time properly.

I hope you can find these suggestions useful.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Miss Wang

【解析】

试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出,写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。三个并列的动名词短语作主语making a proper studying plan such as previewing the courses before class, keeping yourself focused in class, and reviewing after class, would be helpful to improve your study.形式主语和目的状语从句的同时使用:it’s a good idea for you to make some new friends so that you can fit in with the new environment quickly.连接词的使用也是一大亮点:First of all, Besides, In addition

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How successful leaders spent their teenage years

I don’t think I have ever before been compared with Bill Gates, Steve Jobs, etc. 【1】 But for what it is worth, I’ll give you some traits that I think are common among most of these people.

Reading

Read a wide variety of books and articles that stretch your imagination. Don’t just read easy books (like Harry Potter). 【2】Those difficult texts can really stretch your mind.

Because most of the people mentioned grew up in a different era, they spent a big portion of their time just reading the encyclopedia (百科全书). Many of them would eventually read every encyclopedia volume letter. These people had a strong need to learn new things.

Play-acting

At an early age, most of these people spent more time play-acting than others. Very few of these people spent their time playing organized sports---they instead were in their bedroom, backyard, or nearby park playing by themselves. 3

Experimenting

It is amazing how many successful people lit things on fire, blew things up, caught and studied bugs, built bird nests, and more. 4】 And they were the ones in charge of the experiment.

Creating vs. Consuming (消费)

Watching wonderful movies, listening to music, etc. are all great ways to spend time. 5

Most of these successful people spent a large percentage of their time creating. They were building things, starting things, etc. This is really important.

A. Read things that challenge your thought.

B. Today it is harder to spend time creating.

C. They were letting their imagination run wild.

D. They were building, creating, viewing, and observing.

E. But they are passive --- these are consuming functions.

F. Most of these people had parents that asked them to read less.

G. I am nowhere near as successful as most of the people on this list.

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