题目内容
【题目】假如你是Miss Wang,收到高一新生李华的来信,信中提到他在学习和生活上的一些困惑,请你根据以下李华遇到的困惑写一封建议信:
困惑 | 建议 |
1、高中学习科目繁多,学习内容难度较大; | 1、制定学习计划:课前、课中、课后 2、学会安排时间; 3、…… |
2、难以融入新的环境; | 1、结交新朋友; 2、参与课外活动 3、…… |
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 注意卷面整洁、书写规范。问题严重者酌情扣3-6分;书法规范卷面漂亮给阅卷老师愉悦感者给以1-3 分的奖励。
4. 开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入所要求词数内。
Dear Li Hua,
I am sorry you are having trouble in adapting to high school life. __________
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Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Miss Wang
【答案】
Dear Li Hua,
I am sorry you are having trouble in adapting to high school life. Here are some tips help you solve your problems.
First of all, making a proper studying plan such as previewing the courses before class, keeping yourself focused in class, and reviewing after class, would be helpful to improve your study. Besides, it’s a good idea for you to make some new friends so that you can fit in with the new environment quickly. In addition, you’d better take part in after-class activities, which will help you to organize your spare time properly.
I hope you can find these suggestions useful.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Miss Wang
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出,写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。三个并列的动名词短语作主语making a proper studying plan such as previewing the courses before class, keeping yourself focused in class, and reviewing after class, would be helpful to improve your study.形式主语和目的状语从句的同时使用:it’s a good idea for you to make some new friends so that you can fit in with the new environment quickly.连接词的使用也是一大亮点:First of all, Besides, In addition。