Question

17．目前，越来越多的家长花巨资送孩子出国学习，且呈低龄化趋势．部分教育工作者和家长并不赞成这一做法．某英语报社就这一问题做了调查，并开设了专栏讨论．请你 根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，向该报社投稿．

	赞成者38%	反对者62%
原因	接受良好的教育，学好外语将来赚大钱	花钱太多，是在国内学习的10多倍；孩子小，在陌生的环境中容易学坏．

注意：
（1）提示：政府应该采取措施建立各类学校以满足人们的需要；
（2）词数：100左右
Now more and more parents are sending their children overseas for further study，even at middle school age．
                                                                           

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息越来越多的家长花巨资送孩子出国学习，且呈低龄化趋势．部分教育工作者和家长并不赞成这一做法．某英语报社就这一问题做了调查，并开设了专栏讨论．请你 根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，向该报社投稿，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从不同观点和原因两个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：agree to同意；depend on依靠，依赖；broaden their horizons拓展视野；However然而；in favor of支持；Besides另外；take care of照顾；What's more而且；In my opinion以我的观点来看；meet the needs of the people满足人们的需求
They think their children can receive better education and learn a foreign language as well．（高分句型一）
What is the most valuable is to learn to depend on themselves and to broaden their horizons and improve their understanding of the world．（高分句型二）
However，over 62% of the people，especially some educationists and parents，are not in favor of this，for they think studying abroad costs over ten times as much money as in China．（高分句型三）
In my opinion，measures should be taken by the government to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of the people．（高分句型四）

解答 Nowadays more and more people are sending their children overseas for further study，even at middle school age.38% of the people investigated agreed to this．They think their children can receive better education and learn a foreign language as well．（高分句型一）And they have more golden opportunities to develop themselves．What is the most valuable is to learn to depend on themselves and to broaden their horizons and improve their understanding of the world．（高分句型二）
       However，over 62% of the people，especially some educationists and parents，are not in favor of this，for they think studying abroad costs over ten times as much money as in China．（高分句型三） Besides，children are too young to take care of themselves．Many parents worry about the safety of their children．What's more，they might follow bad examples．
       In my opinion，measures should be taken by the government to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of the people．（高分句型四）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．